Cannonball cover please critique

[Mulletman]

i just started playing/singing this song today so it's not refined much. please keep in mind i make changes to all covers i do so be prepared for it not to have the same changes as the cd. it's pretty simplified. i noticed my voice fizzles on the high chorus parts......does better timed breathing help that? i'm not really confident in my voice so any tips you have.......
all that said, any help/comments you have to offer will be greatly appreciated.


http://www.bauer.cx/cannonballcover.mp3 (http://www.bauer.cx/cannonballcover.mp3)

[Tink]

listening now

[Tink]

You do have a good voice there so dont be so nervous have confidence my friend. Keep singing everyday and it will get better. Better breathing does help make sure you are breathing from your diaphragm and not your neck To make sure you are place your hand on your belly, when you breathe in your stomach should deflate make sure you are breathing in from your stomach, you will no if you arent because your shoulders will rise. When you breathe out your stomach should inflate. Have more confidence to you do have a good voice there so let it out.smileys/smiley1.gif