oooh everyone is soooo talented.Your stuff sounds great rubthabuddha. Love your stuff Juzza, you sound a wee bit like Jamie Cullum, great stuff.
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Thanks Tink!!! Is Jamie Cullum the jazz guy who did the radiohead cover? |
yeah he did quite a good cover of High and Dry
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Oh yea, I saw that dude playing his piano and he was hitting the wood too and had this amazing funky, percussion, piano vibe going on... My stuff really remind you of Cullum Tink? That's cool... |
i wrote this song a while back, i was a song i wrote as i got into my friends head, he was enfatuated by this small town girl and wanted to show her his dreams and how big the world is, and he wanted to take her to new york...the guy had plans. so i wrote idonyc... I Dream Of New York City... You used to have stars in your eyes It hurts me to see them fade out But they sparkled tonight As we dreamed of <?:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:City><st1:place>New York City</st1:place></st1:City> And then just for one moment We were not even here at all. <?:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /> From the small town rain in April Through to <st1:place>Brooklyn</st1:place> in the Fall We’ll leave this town, That’s holding down With wings on which we flew so high And I Wanna take you to <st1:City><st1:place>New York City</st1:place></st1:City> were we’ll cry And those we left behind will wonder why Not that we’re torn in two Just we relate to different situations Bound only by our youth Don’t keep yourself from darkness When the light shines on the truth Keep faith in what you know Even though your soul is burnt out But it glimmered tonight As we dreamed of <st1:City><st1:place>New York City</st1:place></st1:City> And then just for one moment We were not even here at all. From the small town rain in April Through to <st1:place>Brooklyn</st1:place> in the Fall We’ll leave this town, That’s holding down With wings on which we flew so high And I Wanna take you to <st1:City><st1:place>New York City</st1:place></st1:City> were we’ll cry And those we left behind will wonder why Not that we’re torn in two Just we relate to different situations Bound only by our youth Don’t keep yourself from darkness When the light shines on the truth its on one of my sites - www.smalltownrockstar.co.uk |
This is a chorus (not a whole song) but I think it's pretty good.
*Clears throat* All you people fighting my war To me it's just a gigantic bore. All you people not wanting to fight Well. My black diamond shoes are on to tightEdited by: Diarmo |
can we get the whole song? sounds really good.
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Yes he did indeed, he has also covered Pharrall Williams' Frontin'. The guy is insane he jumps all over the place. |
Do you wanna come? The road I'm on is a funny one, do you wanna come? you were there, in a lucid dream, or so it seems I saw my future, without the lies, behind your eyes the stars were there, shining bright in your vanilla hair when we fall down, does hope fade or am I stronger cause all I know without you here, I'm going under do you wanna come? do you wanna come? The road I'm on will never do, without you so come on, into my day, it will be OK I saw my future without the lies, behind your eyes the road I'm on is a funny one do you wanna come? when we fall down, does hope fade or am I stronger cause all I know without you here, I'm going under do you wanna come? do you wanna come? |
oi i love that
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Lonely Road heard you on the phone last night when you thought that I was sleeping looking back I should'a known how could I be so blind seems we have a different view on how things have been going you can't say what makes you stay your heart or your mind it's been going wrong too long can I change your mind and should I even try oh no, dunno how to mend your heart hell I don't even know why but it's a lonely road lonely road it's a lonely road lonely road so now I'm paranoid I jump at every shadow always watching what I say scared to know the truth I know I'm losing you and I don't know how to change it guess I thought we'd always be together til the end it's been going wrong too long can I change your mind and should I even try oh no, dunno how to mend your heart girlI don't even know why but it's a lonely road lonely road it's a lonely road lonely roadEdited by: Juzzza |
wow, every song/poem i've read so far is brilliant so i think i'd continue reading for a few days, id like to put up one of my own just to get a reaction, cause friends will always tell u stuff is good even if its sh*t, so when i eventually putone up id like for ppl to say how they really thought about it, like well i really don't like that and that wud be grand. but i think thats also why im delaying, truth hurts sometimes :) k, so far i really like "sold" but everything is wicked. ttfn
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well i havent written any songs yet(playing guitar bout a year) but i did have a girlfriend tell me once that if i loved her i would write her a poem and here it is: roses are red, violets are blue, i cant write poetry, not even for you. we havent talked since...no sense of humor that one. jason amor vincit omnia Edited by: jayavo |
"nowhere home" she is paranoid changing clocks by the hour rummaging her eyes for tears lost at sea she begs the ground to unencumber her raven hair petrified of the past and it's walls all she chooses to see are clouds of retribution thick as ice on her fingertips all she really believes is that her blood is made of glory lost against herself and time though we are rust and maybe dead stars though we are bones and disheveled dreams i will still say, "i promise i'll wait for you, my broken stone." midnight roads accompany her ashen face painting her heart a crimson moon she tears herself grieving empty promises a lotus buried in petals of silk though we are rust and we may be dead stars though we are bones and disheveled dreams i will still say, "i promise i'll wait for you, my broken stone." and i know this dawn will find you lost again in fleeting memories i'll bend my will to shake these ties that have bound you and i because though we are rust and we may be dead stars and though we are bones disheveled dreams i will still say, "i promise i'll wait for you, my broken stone. i'll wait. i'll wait." |
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Thank you ru-doll, if you like 'Sold' PM me your address and I will send you a copy (and 9 other tracks!!!) JT |
Like home (written and recorded before Norah Jones released her album [img]smileys/smiley17.gif[/img]) I'm sitting in the station, waiting for the train to take me somewhere else I'm sitting in my bedroom, picking up a new tune tryin'a sing something else I kinda got to thinking of you and your great smile and I remember, the yellow sand, the ocean spray and I remember, you held my hand, the way we lay the salty wind, the breaking morning, it feels like home, it feels like home I miss your smile, the sense of fallin', it feels like home, it feels like home I try to find some patience but all I have is this loneliness I wonder if you're feeling just as helpless as me too and are you in station waiting for a train to take you somewhere else and I remember, the yellow sand, the ocean spray and I remember, you held my hand, the way we lay the salty wind, the breaking morning, it feels like home, it feels like home I miss your smile, the sense of fallin', it feels like home, it feels like home (mental acoustic explosion follows vocals, cello, guitar and strings mating like rhino's [img]smileys/smiley5.gif[/img]) |
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she's such a ripoff! there's a song on her latest album called 'what am i to you' - coincidence? i think nooooot!she bought O and thought 'there's a great title for a song, what i am to you, i'll just change it a bit, nobody'll notice' but HA! She forgot to consider us eskimos... we've got her now! [img]smileys/smiley2.gif[/img] |
Don't we just make fools of ourselves Once in a while something will ignite your fire and leave you burning up just like a fool once in a while you must do something for something just for. just for you So don't you worry about this boy no don't you even worry 'cause I'll be fine on my own and don't we just make fools of ourselves and don't we just make fools of ourselves once in a while something will ignite your soul and leave you burning up just like a fool once in a while you must do something for, but without trust we are, we are doomed So don't you worry about this boy no don't you even worry 'cause I'll be fine on my own and don't we just make fools of ourselves and don't we just make fools of ourselves |
bloody hell juzza, you just posted about 4 albums worth of stuff... i hope you've copywritten them.[img]smileys/smiley36.gif[/img]
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I don't remember what street we were on,
when we were getting beat while the law looked on. |
hey JT, i haven't been here for a few days, im crap at computers and would love to here "sold" but i don't know how to PM my address?? any help suggestions would be appreciated [img]smileys/smiley1.gif[/img]
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Curses the urge is strong it's calling me it's whispered on the wind it is strong i'll never be the same again I need to feel that wrath in me pumping through my veins oh to be free so don't call me a fool 'cause I'm lost in you lost in you, curses how I miss her sweet embrace the colour of her hair I miss her kiss upon my lips that miss the ghost of her i'll never want like that again I'm lost oh to be free so don't call me a fool 'cause I'm lost in you lost in you, curses |
grand-mere~ coreybyrnes ---------------------------------- time just slips by these days the people that i love carry on i am not hurt by that i am not scorned it is just my time it is just my turn lost my love ten years ago the match was lit too many times i do feel lost without i do feel cut in half it was just his time if my legs don't walk anymore and if my mouth won't talk anymore then these lips they'd say i love you je t'adore je t'adore you will be missed on that day when we take you to your place tears will be shed and our love will be there but there's no other way we will feel lost without we will feel cut in half we'll say it's your time we'll say it's your turn and your legs won't walk anymore and your mouth won't talk anymore but your lips will say i love you je t'adore je t'adore ma grand-mere ma grand-mere --------------------------------------------- i wrote this one about my grandmother... the first half is written from her point of view and thesecond halfis written from mine |
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<LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i'm feeling crossed</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>take it inside </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>burn up the pain</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>my thoughts are strange</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>just like the things i used to love</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>just like the tree that fell </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i heard it</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>if art is still inside i feel it</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left></DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i want to bleed </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>show the world all that i have inside</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i want to scream</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>let the blood flow </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>that keeps me alive</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left></DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>take all these strings</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>they call my veins</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>wrap them around </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>every fu*king thing</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>presence of people not for me</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>well i must remain in tune forever</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>my love is music</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>for i would marry melody</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left></DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i want to bleed </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>show the world all that i have inside</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i want to scream </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>let the blood flow</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>that keeps me alive</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left></DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i want to bleed </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i want to feel</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i want to scream</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i want to bleed</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>won't you let me take you for a ride</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>you can stop the world </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>try to change my mind</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>won't you let me show you how it feels</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>you can stop the world but you won't change me </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i need music</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i need music </DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>i need music</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>to set me free</DIV></LI> <LI> <DIV style="MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px" align=left>to let me bleed</DIV></LI>[/list] {-COLD} |
corey thats a brilliant song about your grandma, well done |
I'm far too scared to put any of my songs up on a forum, lol! Oh, Justin, that song is fantastic! Everyones lyrics are so great, makes mine look like a 8 year olds diary! |
i may as well post up one of mine... <H1 style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt">Paranoid confessions </H1> <?:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /> Help me out, I want to be free Help me out, I don’t wanna be me, Cos we’re all part of some weird sin, We don’t know what we’re living in, Tie your shoes and don’t grow your hair, Stay in school and isn’t it rude to stare, You grow up and find the world has changed, You try try to be somebody but not the one you’ve made, We don’t need what we’ve been told, Our thoughts and minds can be bought or sold, The TV’s on but nobodies home, Your try to be somebody but you’re not alone. The pictures taken but your out of focus, You’re staring hard but trying not to notice, You take it out, of the picture frame, You try to tell yourself that you are not to blame. We don’t need what we’ve been told, Our thoughts and minds can be bought or sold, The TV’s on but nobodies home, Your try to be somebody but you’re not alone. |
That's really great, Jeweller! How do you guys write the lyrics? Past experiences, made up situations, with music, without music, then set it to music? It'd be intresting to hear. I have my weird way of doing it, only problem is, I usually think of lyrics in the weirdest places, then forget them, lol![img]smileys/smiley36.gif[/img]Also, do any of your lyrics you've posted have music? I'm off to the beach today, sure there will be some inspiration there! If I write any thing worth posting, I might post them later...lol![img]smileys/smiley1.gif[/img] |
eyeliner&glitte, All my lyrics have music, if you have Realplayer on your PC, you can listen to the song above, 'Curses' and a few other tunes at my Website... If you don't have Realplayer PM me your address and I will send you a copy of my CD and that goes for any eskimo friend... Including Damo and Lisa [img]smileys/smiley36.gif[/img] Ignore Cold water and The other side though, the host is rubbish and they take ages to download, all the other songs are hosted by Garageband though, which streams the tunes no problem. JT |
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