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Old 02-18-2007, 11:09 AM   #2
Ships_Were_Sailin
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okay its working again now :P.

few things, your voice is too low, its hard to hear it over the piano, and its a shame because we know your voice works :P, and also i think your hitting a wrong note on the piano, at the end of the 4th bar, its not a big deal because its still in key, but its just something i noticed

but its the voice thing thats the main problem, its hard to hear it
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