Thread: 9 Crimes
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Old 02-18-2007, 02:15 PM   #3
Dean C
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There's a few things I picked up on. The first being that 9 crimes is split up into 4 component chords. Am, F, C and then G. You have the final 2 notes on the transition from G back to Am incorrect (but that's just the pedantic musician in me speaking). The second thing is that you are playing far too quickly. You need to calm things down and don't rush, and you will be able to hold your notes a bit easier as you went off key a few times.

As i've said before on your covers you really do have a beatiful smoky tone to your voice, you just need to practice on controlling it Keep up the good work!

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