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Spamlet · 10-04-2018, 10:21 PM

You've actually got "Going Nowhere" mostly right with two exceptions: there should be a question mark after "Have we had enough" and the third line of the chorus is "Heartless in (or perhaps and) hiding".

The second song's questioned points are as follows: 1) "This keeps coming out" 2) "Where's this holiday?" 3) "This keeps coming true"

However, there were also a few things you didn't have questions about which I'd correct as: 1) "What am I to doubt?" 2) "This keeps your hands tied" 3) "This keeps your courage dim" 4) "No, it's all because of me" 5) "This keeps on having me lose" 6) A ton of repeating "I am so, so sorry" at the end

10-04-2018, 10:21 PM	#8
Spamlet Resident Contrarian Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Sunnyside, Queens: NYC Posts: 1,251	You've actually got "Going Nowhere" mostly right with two exceptions: there should be a question mark after "Have we had enough" and the third line of the chorus is "Heartless in (or perhaps and) hiding". The second song's questioned points are as follows: 1) "This keeps coming out" 2) "Where's this holiday?" 3) "This keeps coming true" However, there were also a few things you didn't have questions about which I'd correct as: 1) "What am I to doubt?" 2) "This keeps your hands tied" 3) "This keeps your courage dim" 4) "No, it's all because of me" 5) "This keeps on having me lose" 6) A ton of repeating "I am so, so sorry" at the end __________________ NEW TUNES ARE NOW UP! Please check out these free songs by "America's female Damien Rice": http://www.reverbnation.cim/summerrussell/songs Last edited by Spamlet; 10-04-2018 at 10:23 PM.