Your voice is alright. Not too shabby. what are you using to record? seemed like your guitar didint sound to great. i mean, the playing was fine, and it sounded ok, just sounded that the mic wasnt really being very nice to it.
I got a song of my own if you wanna check it out and return the comment. Its not very good, its kinda just a preview to what my album will be... however, this song wont be on it... so its not really anything but a song i wrote that isnt very good....
Anyway...
www.soundclick.com/robmcgrail