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Old 02-27-2007, 01:53 AM   #5
ChrisKN
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This is a very good song. The best songs are often the most simple.

If I could offer one piece of advice, it would be that it sounds like you're holding back a bit when the song starts to get loud (around 2:00 in). I think it would sound great if you really belted it out. It would make the part when you get quiet again much more dynamic as well.

Cheers

Chris
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