Hey Andrew, Scott.......
Very solid songwriting....not your run of the mill, listening to "The Last Refrian" right now....
Hereare my thoughts on the mix, do you have access to a vocal exciter? If you do, try to run the vocal track through it and try setting it at about 1 to 2 k and set the depth to about 40% this will give your vocals more clarity and aid them in cutting through the mix,
The overall mix is muffled and needs to be boosted in the high end, try EQing the individual tracks if possible, the piano and guitar tracks are lacking clarity, a compressor would also be helpful perhaps on the guitar as well as the vocals, if set properly this will help to tighten up the overall track.......
You have some good equipment, with a few gadgets you can really accomplish alot....are the tracks recorded on analog tape?
Anyway, the song itself is great, reminds me of Tull a bit...
Hope to be of help,
Rey
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