Nice, I like those. Shame about recording quality.
The only problem other than that, for me, was that there seems to be a little too much waiting for the interesting lines. If that makes sense.
I belivied I could fool myself
that I wouldn't care
Now I'm out of breath
cause I'm the most stupid boy in the world
the most stupid boy
It just kinda felt like the first 3 lines, which build up to the main ending lines, didn't really keep my attention and I found I was just kinda waiting for them to end, which seemed to take ages because in the slow tempo. I don't really know how to describe what I mean, so don't take offence from this, as I've probably explained it badly.
Overall I like it though, and I thought you deserved at least one opinion.
