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Old 12-27-2006, 04:37 PM   #32
Juego
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Commuting Visions

Ironic how things fall into place

Now that I'm pondering how this all began

Years seem like minutes as I find myself lost

Navigating pointlessly without knowing left from right

Was there something unsaid?

You are my Sun and I the young flower trying to bloom

My feelings rising and crashing waves and you the Moon

Gravitationally pulling me as I try to pursue

This euphoric journey culminating with you

Optimistically hoping for the story book ending

Despite many obstacles my feelings never required mending

Was I wrong to dream?

Visions of us exploring foreign cities in perfect bliss

Exchanging delightful smiles and casual winks

Non-verbally communicating mutual desires for night to fall

Nocturnal yearning for the union of souls

The perfect ending and intimate spoon*

Is this the end?

Mistaken metaphors, symbolism, analogies and rhyme

Instead of implying, should I just express clearly

What I felt was obviously shown time after time?

The fact that I love you immensely

Feelings overwhelm me, and I continually see

Mirages of you on my morning commute and the rush hour home

Wondering when that time will be

Where neither distance, space nor time could keep us alone










*Spooning/ Spoon

1. A non-sexual embrace which provides the most intimate bonds between lovers and friends.

2. A horizontal hug where the friends/lovers lie back to chest, and fit into each others nooks. Like little spoons in a drawer.

3. A form of affection between couples where the man lays front to back with the girl.
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