First i'd like to say to you, mr. penguin boy, that you sir are a genius!!! beat me is just simply amazing and makes me tingle like a little school boy on the first day of summer. ...
anywho i'm new here so be nice! heres a song i wrote last night at about 2 in the morning......i've had this sweet guitar piece for the longest time but never could come up with any vocals for it, but for some reason i could last night......may sound cheesy but what the hey, i like it....
called my little grey box (or is it gray? i never did know how to spell that)
(Insert sweet guitar here)
I live in a little grey box,
with a little grey door,
and little grey locks.
I built it to be grand,
with these little grey hands,
you may call it ugly, but at least it stands.
and i try to live my life,
like a sailorless ship
a husbandless wife.
and the more i roam,
the more im alone,
holding this emptiness and calling it home.
CHORUS
so hold me here
locked away
but keep me around
for a lonely day
no i dont mind
yea i'll be fine
i'm just gonna need
a little more time
(insert even cooler guitar)
and i cry to fall asleep
but if thats what i want
then it's mine to keep
dont hold me now
cuz ill turn around
and run to my little grey box in the ground
CHORUS
CHORUS
then the first verse again really slow and quiet........its neat lol
just hope i can remember the words as im hoping to play it at the little gig thing in a couple days