Haha check your PM's
I was quite proud of that one it just seemed to come into place. This is a extract of one that i have been working on and have picked back up it needs to have some serious editing done as always I find it strange when I show off my "work" its like I dont want to do this but I need honest opinions good and bad so
Edit - Actually I hated it when I really looked at it just now ignore it.
Ok try this one - "Throne of Dirt" all comments good and bad welcome.
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When will you see what I see?
When will you hear what I hear?
Can you feel what I feel?
Do you know what I do?
Stop pushing the issue,
Cause I cant give you the answer
Im the drug that you crave
But is this addiction killing you to?
You make issues out of the lines I do
But never question why?
I would explain
But would you understand
So we carry on
In our explosive rage
Suppressive domain
A eerie silence plays upon the brain
Like a piano in a mid-summer breeze
And you keep on reaching
In between your preaching
Its all in vain
But your still hoping
I cant make you the promise you want
I can only teach you that times a healer to
And let you listen as I repent
To the higher farther and the mother
Sins that you can only imagine
So step forward baby girl
Let me place this crown of thorns upon your head
Come and sit in my throne
Built of dirt and don’t forget to be curt
Cause I will cut you down
And make you feel what I feel
See what I see
Hear what I hear
Know what I know……