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Old 05-13-2007, 07:09 PM   #3
cestoz
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Originally Posted by robmcgrail
Ok, so this is the last one ive written that will be on the album, the albums gonna have 7 tracks, and the albums title will most probly be "when the cancer comes back" This is a pretty basic rough recording of it. but the skeleton of the track is here. So let me know what you think of it.

Link to the recording: HERE
Her mood changes
And those smiles fade
Theres rocks on these waters
And fire in these caves
With my hand lent for shelter
A hand bound by pain

There are days i dont regret
Mistakes i may have made
And when the cancer comes back
Well those will be the days
With my back for her to lean
A back bound and slain

With a trace of her memory
I lay down tierd and tamed.
can i ask, what is meant by the cancer?
in the chorus its like youre welcoming it.her, is this right? "there are days i dont regret... those will be the days".

..i just want to understand it, thats all, but that apart the lyrics are very good!
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