good luck to ya..
ive just started working on aplay myself....it can be pretty tough to actually get motivation to work on it tho...ive considered making mine a graphic novel instead.
only advice at the moment i can think of is...aside from the script itself...take each character and write out a full page or more of them speaking....almost in a diary/journal type feel.
go nuts and have fun with each separate character....figure out which certain traits each of them have....how they relate and contrast to the other characters, also how the different characters speak and react..giving characters depthis really the most crucial part of writing..in my opinion at least.
a story with 2 intensely created charcters could entertain someone even without a real plotline.
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