[Always_Echos]

Originally Posted by Beevers_uk

Well I've kissed your lips,
And i've looked deep in your eys.
Ive placed my hands on your hip,
But never felt your lies.
Well i've heard you say those words,
And i've seen you cry.
You placed me in those words,
But never felt me try.
Well together we've lied,
And together we stared.
We placed our love high and tried,
But together we felt scared.

Now its over, all we have are out memories,
Along with our tears.
Passing us by, hour after hour,
And time will dry our tears.
If not it will scare our fears,
And we'll fear our love no-more.

I've tried to forget you,
And i've asked for more.
Placed myself in you,
But never felt anymore.
Together we tasted each other,
And together we came.
Placed ourselves in each other,
But never felt the shame.
I've heard your pleasure,
And i've held your face.
Placed our love on the fixture,
But never lost its grace.

Now its over, all we have are out memories,
Along with our pain.
Passing us by, hour after hour,
And time will heal our pain.
If not it will scare our fears,
And we'll fear our love no-more.

This has some pretty good lines in it, the bit about 'never felt your lies' etc, - nice. But I have to admit, I'm getting a little worried about your state of health, I mean, all these songs are obviously for someone who hurt you, and you're kinda of obsessing. I'm not trying to be mean, but you need to find some kind of closure, while your music is getting a lot out of your hurt, you yourself are getting nothing. Maybe we could hear something more positive next time you post? Beautiful words dont have to mean pain. Best of luck hon.