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Old 04-05-2006, 11:28 PM   #694
tj
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guys.. as much feedback on this one would be much appreciated.. it's just written and i really dont know how i feel about these lyrics. for all i know they could be good... they could be really ****. your opinion is needed on this one!

it's called sweet sorrow..

Don't you see that through this whole thing I've been growing
But I guess that through time we've over grew
all these months and i still don't know where we are going,
i really don't wanna burn this photograph of you.

but you're still dancing to this groove darling,
and my pride is so hard to swallow
goodbye...'Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow'

I've never written a thing that I didn't want you to see,
I've never written a thing, maybe, that chapter just isn't in me.

you said you'd love me, if i could tie you down,
but there wasn't a rope strong enough,
you still laugh at all my childish jokes,
after i'd had a few powers and cokes...

but you're still dancing to this groove darling,
and my pride is so hard to swallow
goodbye...'Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow'

I've never written a thing that I didn't want you to see,
I've never written a thing, maybe, that chapter just isn't in me.
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