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Old 04-09-2006, 12:08 PM   #703
Ilium
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Similar to Fool, these are a couple of songs ive recently written and recorded (found at http://www.myspace.com/jamiegiacomelli) Any feedback would be great..
Cheers, Jamie

Let Me Go

Lost in time
Reaching out for you
Seeking more from you
Than you can give

And all the while
Knowing just how far
You’ve flown from me
Distant sound

Make your mark
Floating memory
Melt my soul away
In to the dark

And screaming out
Seems to have no effect
On this shade
I call my heart

In to the dark..


Open up those pretty eyes
Take a breath, look inside
Feel the need, striking deep
Hear the cries, singing sweet

Hum yourself a lullaby
Fear the look, that piercing eye
Thrash out wild, keep control
Strumming heat, let me go
Let me go


In Your Mind


She falls
To catch her unaware
Well fought
Inside, the silver line

See her
Satin Glow
Lie her
Soundless fall

Her doubt
That clouds and poisons
Her truth
Those eyes, whisper mine

See her
Satin Glow
Lie her
Soundless fall (x2)

She looks straight through
And breaks in two
She falls in half
And breaks in two
She takes my hand
And leads me through
This darkened world
The cold that grows

In your mind
In your mind
In your mind
In your mind
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