thanks for your comment samuelle. the powers and cokes line is a bit of a bollix to fit into the melody... im in the middle of changing it!
here's some new lyrics again.. feedback appreciated..
In This April Rain
and as the day made way for night,
all fears disappeared with the sunlight,
i wish i wasn't so simplistic
and i wish you weren't as sadistic,
i wish i wasn't so complicated,
but most of all
i hope it's worth the while we waited.
In this april rain,
I'm calling out your name,
In this april rain,
I'm ready to start this game again.
i'll open the window, let the moonlight shine in,
let it show the beauty of your skin
we could put some brian wilson on,
and remember the days we spent in the sun,
there's no need to run and hide
now its just you and i,
everything else can be cast aside.
In this april rain,
I'm calling out your name,
In this april rain,
I'm ready to start this game again.
Both of us will never forget,
the very first day that we met,
so whats the point in letting go,
when you're the star of my show.
In this april rain,
I'm calling out your name,
In this april rain,
I'm ready to start this game again.