Hello everyone,
What a talented bunch you all are. I'm very proud.
I wrote this about being dumped! Its called Winter Wrist.
She said I'm leaving you tonight, her make ups been thickly applied but shes still beautiful to me,
She drags her stuff down the stairs, catches me unawares with a right hook and some spit
Bridge
You know she's so beautiful when shes angry with me, You know shes so beautiful when shes shouts this at me
Chorus
You are the winter on my wrist, you are the devil I first kissed, so why dont you take hands off me, I'm moving on without you just let me be.
Her bags are packed and by the door where we kissed just an hour before and I dont what I said
I need her now so much more, left hand up feeling sore, bruised soul is left for dead
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Chorus
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Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Ta
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I want to say
Thanks for your grace
And your ability to take my weight
When I lean on you
Your skin is so true
I guess I just miss you
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