Your lyrics - Page 12

BIG TIM · 04-06-2005, 04:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by snowbaby

this isn't really a song yet... its just words at the mo

You're like the moon, I can see you shining bright in all your glory,
But you're untouchable, A golden god, is there any girl out there capable of taming you?
If you are the moon, then I am a star,
You christened me that,
You said I was a star shining underground, Stolen words but they were special to me,
Was that a moment of clarity for you or one of dreadful confusion?
In that moment did you understand the depth of my feelings for you?
In that moment did you understand my position?
I could be the girl, maybe not capable of taming you but I could try save you, If you could save me.
In this universe, stars dance around you, I dance by myself.
Drawn to you like a moth to a flame.
You, the powerful one, the burning light, only sometimes willing to watch me dance for you,
Willing to warm me with your light, for a while,
But if I get too close, I will get burnt,
So I flutter around you.
When your light is hidden behind clouds, I dance with the other stars but I'm always waiting for you to reappear and light up this dark sky.
I understand these confusing steps I dance.
I want only you but I am not even sure of my desire for you.
To protect myself from the others i focus only on you while you enjoy the sparkle of all the other stars.
But i understand, you didn't ask for this.

Hey Snowbaby, I'm new to this site and I love your lyrics from both songs this one has a beautiful flow to it and it has a hell of a lot of potential. it already kicks ass as a poem.

BIG TIM · 04-06-2005, 05:20 AM

Hey Guys,
everyone that has posted lyrics are awesome there is a lot of talent.
I thought i'd post a song from my band it was the first (and only one completed) so please any feed back would be cool.

It aint gonna be me

Need time
need some distance.
Great pain
and great resistance.
I was beggin you to stay,
it could never be that way.

You made me see the end of light
my best friend, that same night.
you think I'll cry
you think I'll fall
you think I'll crumble, cause of it all.

Chorus.

Who said it aint gonna be me
Thats standin here in darkness of sorrow
Who said it aint gonna be me
That's missin' you when your gone tomorrow
I said it aint gonna be you
Who leaves me when your through
I said it aint gonna be me
That's a victum of your love so blinding

I think
I've given all I got
that been said you want more
I'm strong enough,
this you'll see.
why cant you just let me be.

you made me see the end of light
our trust destroyed, in just one night
you think I'll cry
you think I'll fall
you think I'll crumble, cause of it all.

Chorus

You say you love me when you look inton these eyes
but when I look at you now I see nothing but lies
I cant believe you think you can

with me this way
then act all surpirsed when I dont care if you stay.

Chorus to Outro.

Thanks for Reading

Always_Echos · 04-07-2005, 12:23 PM

This is wicked! I love it, just the first few lines made me wanna read on. Have you got it recorded? Coz i'd love to hear it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by BIG TIM

Hey Guys,
everyone that has posted lyrics are awesome there is a lot of talent.
I thought i'd post a song from my band it was the first (and only one completed) so please any feed back would be cool.

It aint gonna be me

Need time
need some distance.
Great pain
and great resistance.
I was beggin you to stay,
it could never be that way.

You made me see the end of light
my best friend, that same night.
you think I'll cry
you think I'll fall
you think I'll crumble, cause of it all.

Chorus.

Who said it aint gonna be me
Thats standin here in darkness of sorrow
Who said it aint gonna be me
That's missin' you when your gone tomorrow
I said it aint gonna be you
Who leaves me when your through
I said it aint gonna be me
That's a victum of your love so blinding

I think
I've given all I got
that been said you want more
I'm strong enough,
this you'll see.
why cant you just let me be.

you made me see the end of light
our trust destroyed, in just one night
you think I'll cry
you think I'll fall
you think I'll crumble, cause of it all.

Chorus

You say you love me when you look inton these eyes
but when I look at you now I see nothing but lies
I cant believe you think you can

with me this way
then act all surpirsed when I dont care if you stay.

Chorus to Outro.

Thanks for Reading

BIG TIM · 04-09-2005, 02:28 AM

Hey thanks very much,

we have it recorded but its not done very well I'm trying to get a hold of it so when i do i can send it to you if you'd like

thanks for the feedback you made my day.

snowbaby · 04-09-2005, 10:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BIG TIM

Hey Snowbaby, I'm new to this site and I love your lyrics from both songs this one has a beautiful flow to it and it has a hell of a lot of potential. it already kicks ass as a poem.

oh

why thank you

BIG TIM · 04-10-2005, 12:47 PM

Hey No Problem,
have you got anymore or any that you have recorded

snowbaby · 04-10-2005, 02:16 PM

am... ive loads of poems thingys but only 4 songs recorded... but only onto a minidisc... oh ya.. does anyone know how id get stuff that's recorded onto my minidisc onto my compooter??

kel :) · 04-10-2005, 03:35 PM

hey guys, this is the first time ive ever shown anybody any of my stuff and im kinda nervous, so here goes and just tell me what you think.

Im lost, confused,
I try to make head or tail of my thoughts,
But nothing I try
Clears the fog you've placed around me.
Time spent together throws me
into spirals of bliss,
So random,
So unexpected, that I never know when
My next hit of happiness will come.

So, tell me now,
Do you still love her?
Does your mind wander to thoughts of her
When wrapped up in me?
When you kiss me, is it me you're kissing?
so tell me now,
Will you ever love me?

I wait, wondering,
Tormenting my mind with thoughts of you,
Obsessive, compulsive,
I dream, eat, think, see you.
Infatuation is taking over,
Help me, unblind me,
Help me
Know where to place my feet as I dont know
Where to stand, when I stand with you.

So, tell me now,
Do you still love her?
Does your mind wander to thoughts of her
When wrapped up in me?
When you kiss me, is it me your kissing?
So tell me now,
Will you ever love me?

lemme know what ye think!

BIG TIM · 04-10-2005, 09:31 PM

Hey Kel,

These lyrics are awesome! Its one of those things where you can just tell that this is a song from personal experience. its beautifully articulated. I really like the line "help me know where to place my feet as i dont know where i stand, when i stand with you"
make sure you place any other songs up

snowbaby · 04-10-2005, 09:34 PM

hey kel, ive also been there and u capture it SO well!!! well done, it's REALLY very good

kel :) · 04-11-2005, 05:21 PM

big tim and snowbaby, thank u so much!! it really boosts the confidence cause i was a little wary bout postin it up! ye really made my day guys!!

Gatsby · 04-13-2005, 02:01 AM

kel those lyrics are awesome, well done

BIG TIM · 04-13-2005, 12:22 PM

hey guys just wrote this, not really a song yet a bit stuck with it at the moment

Garbage Man.

What can I say here I am again, same situation still ending up friends.
What is it about me that cannot be transcended
From becoming a lover after the broken heart is mended
How is it that you can be standing up, and being strong
Without looking downwards seeing me you’re standing on.

After tears that have fallen which you never knew you caused.
After the pains have been wiped away while my life was on pause.
When I stay awake watching for the sunrise on your tomorrow.
You sleep well knowing that my heart is always there to borrow.

Why I don’t get affection for making your world so bearable
Would you notice if I was replaced by another not nearly as capable.
But then I say no because this is the person that I am.
guess that’s why thank yous aren’t heard by garbage men

kel :) · 04-13-2005, 03:54 PM

god, them lyrics are actually excellent...and so real as in part of it is like my own thoughts in my head...seriously well done tim.

and thank u revelate!!means so much. maybe ill put another couple up seeing as i dont feel so nervous anymore!thanx guys!

Miss Pink · 04-13-2005, 10:01 PM

i really shouldnt read them, cuz i tend to steal lines and put them in my own songs.

sorry.

but i will read them and i promice not to steal

BIG TIM · 04-14-2005, 09:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kel :)

god, them lyrics are actually excellent...and so real as in part of it is like my own thoughts in my head...seriously well done tim.

Thanks Kel,
It means a lot, and please do post more of your songs they are awesome.

kel :) · 04-15-2005, 03:53 PM

ok, here goes, another one i found that i wrote a while back:

Tracing your face with my fingers
I memorise every detail of your skin.
Eyelashes flutter with touch
Cheeks are flushed, skin is soft.
I lightly brush my lips against yours
Captivated by sight, enraptured by love.

Eyes are closed, all senses aware,
Your breath soft, I feel the rise and fall
of your body as your arms draw me closer.
Your lips are moist and barely chapped.
Your breath deepens, as does your kiss
And my head starts to spin.

Your hands cup my face gently
And you slowly draw us apart.
You stare into my eyes and your face
crinkles to a smile that is beautiful.
Lost for words, i watch and then
My heart soars as you say
"I love you"

maccas81 · 04-15-2005, 03:57 PM

wow thats very good kel, very poetic.....almost too good for song lyrics!

kel :) · 04-15-2005, 04:08 PM

aw thanx shawn! it is a little poetic but i dont think about it, i just write them and call them songs!!

BIG TIM · 04-15-2005, 11:07 PM

Kel, You must post more songs, you are brilliant.

honestly those lyrics are amazing I got chills reading them.

cello_pudding · 04-16-2005, 06:42 AM

okay...i need to push myself to creating more lyrics so i'm gonna try to make some on the spot right now..

spring leaves
fall from their trees
here is mine
grow back with time

calm breeze
that would comfort me
starts to fail
grows cold in time

beauty that can't be blinded by the sun
close my eyes and i feel its warmth

what we find
brings us to redefine
something so unique,
yet so quickly put behind.

well, i just can't seem to make something that at all cohesive in structure or motif. i give up

basically this is spring, and i'm supposed to be feeling all new with love and all that crap, but right now i'm the exact opposite, waiting for it to come back. a girl that i make "melt to the floor" and finds originality in no one but me, is soooo quick to forget me and move on to anyone...

which pisses me off, cuz she's a girl that is always looking for a guy, and never it working. she'll go out on a date with anybody, but because she's far away she thinks i don't need to exist in her world. well maybe not that far...but i don't know what the crap she wants to find, and i know she won't find it again, she's so temporary with guys, not that she can't commit, just that she's looking for me, but closer in proximity. her patience really sucks, and it frustrates me more than anything in the world right now.

kel :) · 04-16-2005, 11:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BIG TIM

Kel, You must post more songs, you are brilliant.

honestly those lyrics are amazing I got chills reading them.

thank u so much! wow

cello pudding, those lyrics are so well done. like its hidden meaning to everyone but you, so that ppl can make their own out of it.very clever.

paudy · 04-16-2005, 08:41 PM

the chorus to one of my songs is

I've fallen from a cloud,
so fast i'm gonna
hit the ground and i
wish i had wings to fly,
but you make everything allright
you took the rain and
made it bright for me
and for you

damofan · 04-19-2005, 10:37 AM

Somehow I have fashioned a longing for you,
Yet unlike like the seasons, your time is now and for always.
Though trends of love blossom and fade,
This feeling glows with a radiance of all times, never diminishing in its beauty.
No expense spared when it comes to matters of the heart,
For all the fabrics of the human soul embroider us together now.
I have dreamt of your hands of silk, your heart of gold,
Cloaked I have stood in the fields of desire,
Watching the colours of day and night fuse to fabricate all that is pure.
The colours of night so truly covet my longing for you now
As daylight rises, I’m exposed once again to your light.
None so true as the fabrics of the heart
None so pure as emotion
None so bare as the stillness of my soul
The quiet little stirring of commotion.

damofan · 04-19-2005, 10:42 AM

Every Inch of My Being
Every line of my soul
Pours out for you now
I’ve waited for this feeling to come
Every lyric from my mind
Is shed in these pages
I’ve longed for a love like ours
Every picture in my heart
Fades with memories
I’ve wished for something new
Every part of my being
Longs to have you near
I’ve hoped for a love that’s true…

Its a work in progress...Grrrr

BIG TIM · 04-26-2005, 05:27 AM

Samuelle and Damofan.

Those lyrics are awesome. Damofan your first songs is absolutely beautiful.

and samuelle those lyrics are so real i cant find another word for them they are awesome.

Thanks for sharing guys

damofan · 04-26-2005, 02:39 PM

Thanks BIG TIM! work in progress but thought i'd share - i agree Samuelle your lyrics are amazing - very real.

Juzzza · 04-26-2005, 03:41 PM

Broken Ticker

From across the room
over heads and conversations
I still can't look at your face, scared you'll catch on to what I'm feeling

the guy who should be enraptured
stopped listening an age ago
I hear every word, feel every vibration, feel the blush rising from my heart

I know I'm being rash
I know I'm being unfair, on myself, you, them
I know I'm wrong but even a broken clock is right twice a day

I see you looking around the room
you smile and sing and share your song
and still I think when you look at me, it's unique and I'm the only one

I pretend you share this secret
that it's us against them, they don't know
I know you need a friend, nothing more, I love you more than you could ever know

I know I'm being rash
I know I'm being unfair, on myself, you, them
I know I'm wrong but even a broken clock is right twice a day

Miss Pink · 04-26-2005, 06:29 PM

im wrote 1 about the pope dying, and me losing faith and not understanding the significance of a religion

"The world has lost its leader
and the sky is fallin down
He's tryin hard to please her,
But babe cant budge that frown,

Little Buddah's losing weight
Waves come crashing in
While children scream and pray for faith,
I'm not cosey in my skin

Chorus-

So i dance a little harder
Smile a little wider
Cuddle up beside me
When jesus trys to find me
You dance a little harder smile a little wider
I cuddle up beside you
When Jesus tries to find you"

BIG TIM · 04-27-2005, 10:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Juzzza

but even a broken clock is right twice a day

Man that is a killer line I love it.

04-06-2005, 05:20 AM	#332
BIG TIM Polar bear Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: currently Newcastle, England Posts: 400	Hey Guys, everyone that has posted lyrics are awesome there is a lot of talent. I thought i'd post a song from my band it was the first (and only one completed) so please any feed back would be cool. It aint gonna be me Need time need some distance. Great pain and great resistance. I was beggin you to stay, it could never be that way. You made me see the end of light my best friend, that same night. you think I'll cry you think I'll fall you think I'll crumble, cause of it all. Chorus. Who said it aint gonna be me Thats standin here in darkness of sorrow Who said it aint gonna be me That's missin' you when your gone tomorrow I said it aint gonna be you Who leaves me when your through I said it aint gonna be me That's a victum of your love so blinding I think I've given all I got that been said you want more I'm strong enough, this you'll see. why cant you just let me be. you made me see the end of light our trust destroyed, in just one night you think I'll cry you think I'll fall you think I'll crumble, cause of it all. *Chorus* You say you love me when you look inton these eyes but when I look at you now I see nothing but lies I cant believe you think you can with me this way then act all surpirsed when I dont care if you stay. Chorus to Outro. Thanks for Reading __________________ Stars don't have mirrors because true beauty doesn't need them .

04-09-2005, 02:28 AM	#334
BIG TIM Polar bear Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: currently Newcastle, England Posts: 400	Hey thanks very much, we have it recorded but its not done very well I'm trying to get a hold of it so when i do i can send it to you if you'd like thanks for the feedback you made my day. __________________ Stars don't have mirrors because true beauty doesn't need them .

04-10-2005, 12:47 PM	#336
BIG TIM Polar bear Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: currently Newcastle, England Posts: 400	Hey No Problem, have you got anymore or any that you have recorded __________________ Stars don't have mirrors because true beauty doesn't need them .

04-10-2005, 02:16 PM	#337
snowbaby Eskimo Regular Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Ireland Posts: 356	am... ive loads of poems thingys but only 4 songs recorded... but only onto a minidisc... oh ya.. does anyone know how id get stuff that's recorded onto my minidisc onto my compooter?? __________________ i was thinking bout your face, rolling down the river...only if you ride the tide, balanced on the biggest wave...you give me miles and miles of mountains, and i ask for the sea

04-10-2005, 09:31 PM	#339
BIG TIM Polar bear Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: currently Newcastle, England Posts: 400	Hey Kel, These lyrics are awesome! Its one of those things where you can just tell that this is a song from personal experience. its beautifully articulated. I really like the line "help me know where to place my feet as i dont know where i stand, when i stand with you" make sure you place any other songs up __________________ Stars don't have mirrors because true beauty doesn't need them . Last edited by BIG TIM; 04-10-2005 at 09:37 PM.

04-10-2005, 03:35 PM	#338
kel :) arty eskimo Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: waterford in the sunny south east! Posts: 750	hey guys, this is the first time ive ever shown anybody any of my stuff and im kinda nervous, so here goes and just tell me what you think. Im lost, confused, I try to make head or tail of my thoughts, But nothing I try Clears the fog you've placed around me. Time spent together throws me into spirals of bliss, So random, So unexpected, that I never know when My next hit of happiness will come. So, tell me now, Do you still love her? Does your mind wander to thoughts of her When wrapped up in me? When you kiss me, is it me you're kissing? so tell me now, Will you ever love me? I wait, wondering, Tormenting my mind with thoughts of you, Obsessive, compulsive, I dream, eat, think, see you. Infatuation is taking over, Help me, unblind me, Help me Know where to place my feet as I dont know Where to stand, when I stand with you. So, tell me now, Do you still love her? Does your mind wander to thoughts of her When wrapped up in me? When you kiss me, is it me your kissing? So tell me now, Will you ever love me? lemme know what ye think!

04-10-2005, 09:34 PM	#340
snowbaby Eskimo Regular Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Ireland Posts: 356	hey kel, ive also been there and u capture it SO well!!! well done, it's REALLY very good __________________ i was thinking bout your face, rolling down the river...only if you ride the tide, balanced on the biggest wave...you give me miles and miles of mountains, and i ask for the sea

04-11-2005, 05:21 PM	#341
kel :) arty eskimo Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: waterford in the sunny south east! Posts: 750	big tim and snowbaby, thank u so much!! it really boosts the confidence cause i was a little wary bout postin it up! ye really made my day guys!!

04-13-2005, 02:01 AM	#342
Gatsby Eskimo Regular Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Dublin Posts: 5,809	kel those lyrics are awesome, well done __________________ "Tomorrow we will run faster, stretch out our arms further…And on fine morning - So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past." https://www.twitch.tv/simonjmusic

04-13-2005, 12:22 PM	#343
BIG TIM Polar bear Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: currently Newcastle, England Posts: 400	hey guys just wrote this, not really a song yet a bit stuck with it at the moment Garbage Man. What can I say here I am again, same situation still ending up friends. What is it about me that cannot be transcended From becoming a lover after the broken heart is mended How is it that you can be standing up, and being strong Without looking downwards seeing me you’re standing on. After tears that have fallen which you never knew you caused. After the pains have been wiped away while my life was on pause. When I stay awake watching for the sunrise on your tomorrow. You sleep well knowing that my heart is always there to borrow. Why I don’t get affection for making your world so bearable Would you notice if I was replaced by another not nearly as capable. But then I say no because this is the person that I am. guess that’s why thank yous aren’t heard by garbage men __________________ Stars don't have mirrors because true beauty doesn't need them . Last edited by BIG TIM; 04-14-2005 at 11:02 AM.

04-13-2005, 03:54 PM	#344
kel :) arty eskimo Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: waterford in the sunny south east! Posts: 750	god, them lyrics are actually excellent...and so real as in part of it is like my own thoughts in my head...seriously well done tim. and thank u revelate!!means so much. maybe ill put another couple up seeing as i dont feel so nervous anymore!thanx guys!

04-13-2005, 10:01 PM	#345
Miss Pink Eskimo Regular Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 5,327	i really shouldnt read them, cuz i tend to steal lines and put them in my own songs. sorry. but i will read them and i promice not to steal __________________ We don't crave what hurts... we hurt when we hope for something and it turns out to not be what we wanted...the pain is often our hope breaking... not our hearts.

04-15-2005, 03:53 PM	#347
kel :) arty eskimo Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: waterford in the sunny south east! Posts: 750	ok, here goes, another one i found that i wrote a while back: Tracing your face with my fingers I memorise every detail of your skin. Eyelashes flutter with touch Cheeks are flushed, skin is soft. I lightly brush my lips against yours Captivated by sight, enraptured by love. Eyes are closed, all senses aware, Your breath soft, I feel the rise and fall of your body as your arms draw me closer. Your lips are moist and barely chapped. Your breath deepens, as does your kiss And my head starts to spin. Your hands cup my face gently And you slowly draw us apart. You stare into my eyes and your face crinkles to a smile that is beautiful. Lost for words, i watch and then My heart soars as you say "I love you"

04-15-2005, 03:57 PM	#348
maccas81 Eskimo Ladies Man Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Donegal Posts: 2,541	wow thats very good kel, very poetic.....almost too good for song lyrics! __________________ I'm happy, hope you're happy too.....

04-15-2005, 04:08 PM	#349
kel :) arty eskimo Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: waterford in the sunny south east! Posts: 750	aw thanx shawn! it is a little poetic but i dont think about it, i just write them and call them songs!!

04-15-2005, 11:07 PM	#350
BIG TIM Polar bear Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: currently Newcastle, England Posts: 400	Kel, You must post more songs, you are brilliant. honestly those lyrics are amazing I got chills reading them. __________________ Stars don't have mirrors because true beauty doesn't need them .

04-16-2005, 06:42 AM	#351
cello_pudding Eskimo Regular Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 185	okay...i need to push myself to creating more lyrics so i'm gonna try to make some on the spot right now.. spring leaves fall from their trees here is mine grow back with time calm breeze that would comfort me starts to fail grows cold in time beauty that can't be blinded by the sun close my eyes and i feel its warmth what we find brings us to redefine something so unique, yet so quickly put behind. well, i just can't seem to make something that at all cohesive in structure or motif. i give up basically this is spring, and i'm supposed to be feeling all new with love and all that crap, but right now i'm the exact opposite, waiting for it to come back. a girl that i make "melt to the floor" and finds originality in no one but me, is soooo quick to forget me and move on to anyone... which pisses me off, cuz she's a girl that is always looking for a guy, and never it working. she'll go out on a date with anybody, but because she's far away she thinks i don't need to exist in her world. well maybe not that far...but i don't know what the crap she wants to find, and i know she won't find it again, she's so temporary with guys, not that she can't commit, just that she's looking for me, but closer in proximity. her patience really sucks, and it frustrates me more than anything in the world right now.

04-16-2005, 08:41 PM	#353
paudy prodigal son Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Waterford boy Posts: 1,158	the chorus to one of my songs is I've fallen from a cloud, so fast i'm gonna hit the ground and i wish i had wings to fly, but you make everything allright you took the rain and made it bright for me and for you __________________ Were never gonna survive unless......We get a little crazy

04-19-2005, 10:37 AM	#354
damofan Eskimo Regular Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 278	Somehow I have fashioned a longing for you, Yet unlike like the seasons, your time is now and for always. Though trends of love blossom and fade, This feeling glows with a radiance of all times, never diminishing in its beauty. No expense spared when it comes to matters of the heart, For all the fabrics of the human soul embroider us together now. I have dreamt of your hands of silk, your heart of gold, Cloaked I have stood in the fields of desire, Watching the colours of day and night fuse to fabricate all that is pure. The colours of night so truly covet my longing for you now As daylight rises, I’m exposed once again to your light. None so true as the fabrics of the heart None so pure as emotion None so bare as the stillness of my soul The quiet little stirring of commotion. __________________ 'You never were gonna change your mind, were you Emily..'

04-19-2005, 10:42 AM	#355
damofan Eskimo Regular Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 278	Every Inch of My Being Every line of my soul Pours out for you now I’ve waited for this feeling to come Every lyric from my mind Is shed in these pages I’ve longed for a love like ours Every picture in my heart Fades with memories I’ve wished for something new Every part of my being Longs to have you near I’ve hoped for a love that’s true… Its a work in progress...Grrrr __________________ 'You never were gonna change your mind, were you Emily..'

04-26-2005, 05:27 AM	#356
BIG TIM Polar bear Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: currently Newcastle, England Posts: 400	Samuelle and Damofan. Those lyrics are awesome. Damofan your first songs is absolutely beautiful. and samuelle those lyrics are so real i cant find another word for them they are awesome. Thanks for sharing guys __________________ Stars don't have mirrors because true beauty doesn't need them .

04-26-2005, 02:39 PM	#357
damofan Eskimo Regular Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 278	Thanks BIG TIM! work in progress but thought i'd share - i agree Samuelle your lyrics are amazing - very real. __________________ 'You never were gonna change your mind, were you Emily..'

04-26-2005, 03:41 PM	#358
Juzzza Eskimo Regular Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Jersey Posts: 924	Broken Ticker From across the room over heads and conversations I still can't look at your face, scared you'll catch on to what I'm feeling the guy who should be enraptured stopped listening an age ago I hear every word, feel every vibration, feel the blush rising from my heart I know I'm being rash I know I'm being unfair, on myself, you, them I know I'm wrong but even a broken clock is right twice a day I see you looking around the room you smile and sing and share your song and still I think when you look at me, it's unique and I'm the only one I pretend you share this secret that it's us against them, they don't know I know you need a friend, nothing more, I love you more than you could ever know I know I'm being rash I know I'm being unfair, on myself, you, them I know I'm wrong but even a broken clock is right twice a day __________________ www.justinthorne.com ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 'Ninjas killed my family, I need money for Kung-Fu lessons'... homeless guy's sign, New York (May 2005) http://www.myspace.com/justinthorne http://www.myspace.com/jtintheshadows

04-26-2005, 06:29 PM	#359
Miss Pink Eskimo Regular Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 5,327	im wrote 1 about the pope dying, and me losing faith and not understanding the significance of a religion "The world has lost its leader and the sky is fallin down He's tryin hard to please her, But babe cant budge that frown, Little Buddah's losing weight Waves come crashing in While children scream and pray for faith, I'm not cosey in my skin Chorus- So i dance a little harder Smile a little wider Cuddle up beside me When jesus trys to find me You dance a little harder smile a little wider I cuddle up beside you When Jesus tries to find you" __________________ We don't crave what hurts... we hurt when we hope for something and it turns out to not be what we wanted...the pain is often our hope breaking... not our hearts.