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03-14-2006, 11:25 PM | #1 |
Eskimono
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Kristianstad in the south of Sweden.
Posts: 21
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Inspiration....
For me, as for everyone else here I belive, Damien is a great inspiration! I made some songs that I relate to him. Tell me what ya think good or bad!!!
http://mp3download.myspace.com/index...y&fid=55022726 Stupid Boy What was I thinking I'm insane I can't find words for the most stupid boy in the world the most stupid boy It's not hard to fall when you fly with wings made of stone I'm the most stupid boy in the world the most stupid boy I really thought I could resist I really thought I would withstand I thought high of myself I really did look at me now I belivied I could fool myself that I wouldn't care Now I'm out of breath cause I'm the most stupid boy in the world the most stupid boy You didn't have to say one single word I fell head over heals for the most beautiful girl in the world for the most beautiful girl in the world http://mp3download.myspace.com/index...s&fid=55022726 Two Horses Bitter sweet, taste in my mouth a burning, cold decease It fills my senses, as it streams through my veins Your fingertips, burned my skin a sensation to seize It gets to my head, makes me weak as it gains Two horses and two ropes tied around my arms pulling different ways and it's tearing, tearing me apart Where do I go Where can I lay down my thoughts to repose Am I lost or found am I lost or found am I lost or found Should I yield, raise my arms and surrender to you should I fight, this endless battle for the only cause I know Increasing minutes and hours of absence I fall into descending deeper and deeper to a place I don't know Two horses and two ropes tied around my arms pulling different ways and it's tearing, tearing me apart Where do I go where can I lay down my thought to repose Am I lost or found am I lost or found am I lost or found...
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03-20-2006, 03:59 PM | #2 |
Eskimo Fool
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Exeter, Devon, UK.
Posts: 175
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Nice, I like those. Shame about recording quality.
The only problem other than that, for me, was that there seems to be a little too much waiting for the interesting lines. If that makes sense. I belivied I could fool myself that I wouldn't care Now I'm out of breath cause I'm the most stupid boy in the world the most stupid boy It just kinda felt like the first 3 lines, which build up to the main ending lines, didn't really keep my attention and I found I was just kinda waiting for them to end, which seemed to take ages because in the slow tempo. I don't really know how to describe what I mean, so don't take offence from this, as I've probably explained it badly. Overall I like it though, and I thought you deserved at least one opinion. |
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