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03-02-2005, 01:19 PM | #1 |
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Opinions please...
Hi,
I am off to record some tunes next month, and am thinking about a studio version of this tune: http://www.bbc.co.uk/jersey/realmedi...rne_my_run.ram Let me know what you think. Thanks JT
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03-04-2005, 09:45 PM | #2 |
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I personally really like that song, well done mate....tis fab
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03-05-2005, 09:45 AM | #3 |
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Great song!I really like it
Can you post the lyric?
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03-05-2005, 01:25 PM | #4 |
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Thanks guys, yea that's one of my own tunes.
Lyrics: When I feel the hunger, you fill me up, you fill me up when I feel I'm falling, you pick me up, you pick me up and I win back the sun and it's true what they say and I've been blessed the whole of my life when it's you and I know I've had my run I've had it all and seen it gone, gone, gone I've had my run I've had it all, and seen it gone, gone, gone, gone, gone when you hear the thunder, I'll fill you up, I'll fill you up when you feel you're under, I'll pick you up, I'll pick you up and I win back the sun and it's true what they say and I've been blessed the whole of my life when it's you and I know
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03-05-2005, 08:36 PM | #5 |
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I think the lyrics are lovely. My favourite track of yours, used to be 'sold', but I think it has just been replaced by this track. Good luck in the studio Justin, I bet you have a ball! (any room for a stow-away btw)?
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03-05-2005, 09:29 PM | #6 |
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awww sum 1 write that abt me! i love it!!
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03-06-2005, 12:24 PM | #7 |
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Maybe I did! ;-)
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03-06-2005, 12:57 PM | #8 |
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Great lyrics,too!
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lol write a song abt me just for the laugh!!! please? ~pinky does come hithery eyes to seduce juzzza~
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03-07-2005, 09:37 AM | #10 |
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Miss Pink
She says 'we don't crave what hurts and talks of our hope breaking I see your name every day I read your thoughts, feelings and dreams I feel like I know you, miss you when you're gone but I don't have a face to touch or your body to shape my song I've got nothing to go on, just some words a smile created in my mind, and some eyes that I can't find I think of you on that bus and wish it was me you were watching I wonder if he's aware, of what he could be holding eyes may be windows to the soul but the net comes with subtitles I'll never read your mind, but I can read your hope I've got nothing to go on, just some words a smile created in my mind, and some eyes that I can't find
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03-07-2005, 09:39 AM | #11 |
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i think she'll be very happy with that justin
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03-07-2005, 09:41 AM | #12 |
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saw the thread you wrote bout going to new york...any plans for coming over here?
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03-07-2005, 10:03 AM | #13 |
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I would love to mate, did I mention my father (and his entire family) are Irish?
Apart from NYC I am also taking two weeks out to surf a few reef breaks in Lohifushi (Maldives), but I would still love to come over and play some shows in Ireland and especially, meet some eskimos. We'll have to see how things go, but a long weekend would be good with some shows in and around Cork? Dunno, I'd need help finding good venues.
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03-07-2005, 10:11 AM | #14 |
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i couldnt tell you much about the cork scene im afraid, sorry
im sure you could fit a show in dublin too
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03-07-2005, 10:15 AM | #15 |
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Yea of course Dublin! I'd fly in to Dublin (and out of) so that would be good.
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03-08-2005, 05:31 PM | #16 | |
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oh i love it i love it i love it!!!!!!!!! esp the bit about my eyes, cuz funny enough i always get complimented on my eyes! lol oh i love the bit about about not having a face to touch or a body to shape ur song, i must say if u were "real" and a boy i was interested in or visa verse, id go out with u in an instant....... awwwwwwwww, got a melody in mind?
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03-09-2005, 12:56 AM | #17 |
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Not yet (melody), but I'll see what I can come up with.
Glad you like it. And really, would you go out with a 'boy' for writing you a song!?! Sh*t, all those years I wasted when I could have been taking girls out by writing a few lyrics Ah well, live and learn. I don't think it works with women my age.
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03-09-2005, 02:17 PM | #18 |
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juzza ;your a charmer.but the song for miss pink is beautiful,nice one,.
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03-11-2005, 11:14 AM | #19 |
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Thanks niallo... although I wasn't trying to charm Pinky, I just enjoy trying to come up with lyrics, and this was a real challenge as usually I write about myself or someone I know really well. Without meeting Miss P and only connecting with an online presence, it was tough but then that was the theme I explored.
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03-12-2005, 11:49 AM | #20 |
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Melody written, song complete.
Lyrics slightly amended for melody: Softly, take it easy slowly, on your own she says 'we don't crave what hurts and talks of our hope breaking but I don't have a face to touch or your body to shape my song I've got nothing for me to go on, just some words a smile created in my mind, and some eyes that I can't find softly, take it easy slowly, on your own I think of you on that bus and wish it was me you were watching but I don't have a face to touch or your body to shape my song I've got nothing for me to go on, just some words a smile created in my mind, and some eyes that I can't find
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oh my..........im flattered, and yes a "boy" who wrote me a song or paitned me sth etc, id melt and date for a life time! melt melt melt. Pitty it doesnt work or girlies your age..... i have to hear this now, ohhhh im all happy! oh i'l do your art for the *next* album! lol i agree it is really beautiful, i which i could write lyrics like that, im struggling with my songst but my art is blooming, im working on another large canvas. setting chalanges for yourself like writing my song will do you the world of good, it will improve you even more! Quote:
oh and i did email u my song but it said ur inbox was full, i'l post or pm you the addy as password ok?
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do boys not realise how hot they are when they play guitar???
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03-14-2005, 10:39 AM | #23 |
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Well Pinky, I played your song last night at the Moody Blues... it was my first song of the night and it got a good reception... I may have to record it when I am in New York in May... and if Vienna's gig happens I will definitely play it there.
Of course if it is recorded, you will be the first to hear it. Sorry about my email addy, I can't for the life of me work out how to buy more memory for the bloody thing, try juzzza (at) jerseymail.co.uk PS, your song is called 'Mellowdrama' and that's gonna be the name of my next CD too.
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oh wow!! ok im so doing the art!!! lol!!!! im chuffed to bits!!!!!! ah wow! ok i'l sent u the song to the new email! Did u explain the story behind the song?? lol!
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Not quite, I just explained that I had only composed it the day before, and that it's about seeing someone every day without actually knowing them, and is almost a confession to that person, almost like 'look, I know THIS about you, and I know you know nothing about me, but it could be really good' you know?
People are used to me ranting before a song.
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i really liked that song..really really really good.
your style actually reminded me a lot of pete courtney, have you ever heard him? www.petecourtney.com pubs in cork you could play at: an crúiscín lán the lobby (but apparently it's for sale?) and i can't think of any more, not being a pub-goer! venues: the half moon theatre the everyman palace theatre the triskel arts centre the sirius arts centre, cobh
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03-15-2005, 04:58 PM | #27 |
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lol ok juzzza pants.........i cant wait to hear it!!
did u get my song? just a little tip, vienna will be in dublin, paudy's pub is not in dublin but a 3 hr drive from dublin......
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03-16-2005, 09:29 AM | #28 |
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Juzzza pants!!! is that my new nickname or are you panting?
Still not got your song, try juzzza(at)hotmail.com that place has a 250meg limit, so should be okay. Thanks Livo kind of you to say, I am glad you like it and thanks for the tips on bars.
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03-16-2005, 10:31 PM | #29 |
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ok sending the song
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03-20-2005, 07:57 PM | #30 |
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i sent the song did u get it?
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