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01-12-2007, 12:50 AM | #871 |
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People definatly are to materialistic and self obsessive, but, thats how it is. Nothing is going to change that anytime soon. I hate the expectation layed on every little thing all the time, i hate the way people abuse common sence and morals for stupidity and fear. I hate the way i hate every little thing about this planet and love it and its beauty at the same time. I hate how i self loath and self destruct. But in the end... i love. And through self loathing and self destruction we might find some answers... or maybe, more importantly, forget the questions...
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01-12-2007, 07:15 PM | #872 |
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^ meh lyrical none the less. Fair conclusion, "who needs reasons when you have heroin". Hehe, guffaw.
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01-12-2007, 08:02 PM | #873 | |
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01-13-2007, 01:13 AM | #874 |
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How can someone with such lack of humor. I was joking, i get what the saying was getting at, i was mearly making it literal for the purpose of humor.
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01-13-2007, 11:52 AM | #875 |
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Didnt really work then did it?
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01-13-2007, 05:42 PM | #876 |
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No, your obviustly far to intellectually superior for me, and find the very thought of humor a complete waste of time, and as a result have spent none of your life understanding it.
Theres no need to make an arguement out of this man, just drop it ok. I was joking with BIG tim. He didnt take offecne to my comment, he must have picked up on the fact i was joking, i dont care what he has in his signiture, thats a stupid thing to concern myself with. And this had no reason for you to involve yourself in. |
01-13-2007, 09:44 PM | #877 | |
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4th class (/grade): Circle the incorrect word(s ) in this sentence
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01-14-2007, 12:19 AM | #878 | |
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01-14-2007, 04:25 PM | #879 |
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These are some good lyrics, keepem comming
All together now: "Devoid, devoid, devoid, of IM-AG-IN-AT-ION la la la la la la la Devoid, devoid, devoid, of HU-MO-OU-OU-OUR la la la la la la la Signature Big Tim, involve yourself la la la la la la la Fourth Grade Fourth class la la la la la la la. All dressed up for Rob McGrail All dressed up for him, LALALALALAL CATTY CATTY BITCHY BITCHY EMPTY EMPTY Over-reacty, over reacty; CLARITY CLARITY!" I don't like to brag, but i think i've just bettered anything damien rice has everr written (that IS a joke by the way; clarity!).
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01-14-2007, 04:52 PM | #880 |
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Tell me
Tell me if you're going to leave
So i can help pack your bag All this lust lacks depth On my shelf you sat and wept Packaged up and left out Weatherd and breatched Lost and never reached So tell me If you're gonna leave You keep me cold With my faults numberd Ask me seven times And i'll answer in sums Was it a beautiful statment To walk away Do i leave myself in your room Or at least a small part that woulndt stay The coffee stains Have set in my dear The marching orders Still ring in my ear You kept me cold So my thoughts were numbed Ask me seven times Then tell me i'm lost Ask me seven times Then tell me i've lost... |
01-15-2007, 06:10 AM | #881 | |
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01-15-2007, 08:06 AM | #882 | |
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01-15-2007, 06:19 PM | #883 | |
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01-15-2007, 09:31 PM | #884 | |
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01-29-2007, 12:32 AM | #885 | |
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Right guys, i want your HONEST opinion on this, its a song i am kind of attempting about my ex who lets just say was very uptight and well not very forthcoming would lock things up etc
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Already got the first verse of another song.> Waking up, starring at the window, just another grey day Until I roll over, and see why I stay Enough beauty to light a black hole Justifies why I fight for my existence We will seee. Last edited by This has got to die; 01-29-2007 at 01:46 AM. |
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01-30-2007, 07:56 AM | #886 |
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Hey, This has got to die, I like it. I think there is some good stuff in there, I especially like the 'so give me your keys'... really nice imagery and analogy.
I've said it many times that most lyrics can come across as cheesy or cliche without the context of the melody and as part of the tune in its entirety, so it only has to work for you, the songwriter. However, I think the desire to have the verses rhyme, weakens the lyrics here... 'gaze' and 'daze' for example just reads as there because it fits rather than enhancing the story in the song. One thing you've got, which is priceless, is the ability to create visual stories with words.
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01-30-2007, 10:19 PM | #887 | |
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Yeah I dont like trying to make it Ryme it seems very unatrul I have said that before!
Thank you very much for getting back to me and for the kind words, I have finished the other set of lyrics just got to get someone to sing them now, hopefully I can I ahve someone in mind just got to catch him online! This song came to me quite quick in the end and again I would like your honest opinion this will probably be the last one I write for a little while thank you again. Quote:
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02-01-2007, 03:13 PM | #888 |
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hi all, here's my contribution to this cool thread
Time leads us apart And hardens our hearts Makes us see no difference Between our present and our past We prayed our luck could last But was there any chance To break through the gates It’s hard to simulate And we should never try To change our destiny And shape what cannot be Only to satisfy Our need to understand And simplify an end We just cannot bear The loss and the curse The oblivion and worse How must we prepare Our cracked little bones To rot and break alone On a cold October day Come, we’ll find a safer road Though we’ve always been told There was no other way. Now we must run and search much higher To find what we could become Cause we are blessed, now more than ever And our time will surely come |
02-02-2007, 04:58 AM | #889 |
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^ Fantastic work...I'd write a full review, but my parents are in the car waiting for me...
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02-02-2007, 06:34 AM | #890 |
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^^ I really digged it too!!
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02-02-2007, 08:53 AM | #891 |
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Thanks a lot Audity and Cille! I'm glad you like it.
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02-09-2007, 04:07 AM | #892 |
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A song that I am working on.
Take my hand My land My home and my bread My mum, her aunt but not my soul You cant Our soil has gone The fires settle Babies cry, scream, amongst the carcasses To young to see This is their future for years to come On the news this fair day For a week or two Forgotten by the next Still, we walk alone You can lie, pretend to care, then go back to happy times Live 8? Whats that? Where you, me and everyone felt good about ourselves While my family got set upon Raped and pillaged Come to us We don’t want your money We need your help Solid hands Not funds to make him upstairs a new palace |
02-10-2007, 05:44 PM | #893 | |
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02-10-2007, 06:47 PM | #894 |
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Its not a song ABOUT live 8.
Live 8 is in it, but that was mainly my personal feelings towards what I felt was nothing more than a publicity boost for most people... |
02-10-2007, 07:20 PM | #895 |
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youre ****in right. a guilt relief trip.
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02-10-2007, 07:24 PM | #896 |
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Yeah like the BANDS that came out you know the white ones, and people would have loads on their arm to show how much they cared? Funny I don't see many now really.
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02-10-2007, 08:56 PM | #897 |
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i dont know what just happened here,
youve torn a page out of your book, the one you wrote my name on does this mean youre moving on? you said you'd never wash your hands again, after you had held mine you said youd never wash your hands again, why did you change your mind? could you still feel me when he held you, feel me deep inside so deeply i once was, back when you had nothing to hide im not sure what just happened here, you've tore a picture off the wall, the one that had my face on does this mean youre moving on? you said youd never wash you face again, those lips i kissed upon you said youd never wash your hands again, now you seem to have forgotten.. could you still taste me when he kissed you? remember me and my old lips? so deep and deeper still, you took all i had to give.. was it so easy to replace me retrace the path i found to find you.. passed your lips, your skin to your heart does its every beat not still remind you... i dont know what just happened here you tore a page out of my book the one you drew a heart round your name and mine, i thought everything was fine... 'the "could you still..." bits, the chorus, is so obviously copying damo on the new album 'do you brush your teeth before you kiss' etc, so will have to be changed, but i still kind of think it has some potential...
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02-10-2007, 09:54 PM | #898 |
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I like that allot. Very nice writeing, love the first verse.
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02-11-2007, 12:13 AM | #899 | |
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Wonderful imagery... "you said you'd never wash" lines are excellent...I know what you mean The books lines remind me of a song I wrote recently
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02-11-2007, 11:47 AM | #900 |
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hey, thanks a lot for the comments, and i came on here expecting to delete it after having it being ripped to shreds! :-)
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