Your lyrics - Page 31

audity · 02-13-2007, 04:10 PM

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Originally Posted by cestoz

hey, thanks a lot for the comments, and i came on here expecting to delete it after having it being ripped to shreds! :-)

write something crappy and we will rip it to shreds

cestoz · 02-13-2007, 07:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by audity

write something crappy and we will rip it to shreds

haha, be careful what you wish for.

so, you mentioned it was similar to something you had written, would you be willing to share it? because apart from being interested in it, i still need a chorus, so im looking to plaguarise / steal something from someone else apart from damien rice! ;-)

johnnyappleseed · 02-15-2007, 11:03 PM

just adding to the fun

its been 14 days down
swear one day i'll come around
till then im just wasting my days
she said she is gone
i said girl move along
cause i dont need your kind around here no more
hey you there
i think you forgot to care
about something other then yourself
everyone just stares into the sun
trying to become blind to everything
momma said boy
wont you go do something with yourself
you dont want to end up just like your pa
and daddy said boy dont end up like me
driving truck for the rest of your life
what the ****
we got to move along
got to keep your feet trucking along
cause if you stand in one place to long
you will be come crazy
you got to work it out got to work it all out
you got to work away the pain
thats what they selling you man
just try to stay strong
but somedays are so long
i try and i try to just get along
now its 15 days down
still staring at the ground
as i walk past a faded love.

rprice119 · 02-16-2007, 08:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by johnnyappleseed

just adding to the fun

its been 14 days down
swear one day i'll come around
till then im just wasting my days
she said she is gone
i said girl move along
cause i dont need your kind around here no more
hey you there
i think you forgot to care
about something other then yourself
everyone just stares into the sun
trying to become blind to everything
momma said boy
wont you go do something with yourself
you dont want to end up just like your pa
and daddy said boy dont end up like me
driving truck for the rest of your life
what the ****
we got to move along
got to keep your feet trucking along
cause if you stand in one place to long
you will be come crazy
you got to work it out got to work it all out
you got to work away the pain
thats what they selling you man
just try to stay strong
but somedays are so long
i try and i try to just get along
now its 15 days down
still staring at the ground
as i walk past a faded love.

Great stuff man. Does your dad really drive truck for a living? What was your inspiration for this song?

johnnyappleseed · 02-16-2007, 08:34 PM

Yeah he also arm wrestles on the side. Hey bob dont make me come over your house and beat you up. Why dont you put your song up about Andy.

carvinC980t_kid · 02-22-2007, 05:36 AM

This is a little somethin i just threw together about a fight i got in over at my friends apt in a rougher part of the town he moved to. if any of ya remember the story cause i know i shared it... i asked some dudes directions and they started being rude, so i just walked away till the had to start harassing me. the lyrics tell the rest of what happened.

niggas frontin like thugs standin round with their clicks
but when you f*ck with me it becomes true gangsta sh*t
i gone shown up to the gun show with nothin but fists
son, it's time to realize you in ova ya head
yeah, i did hop out my ride in ya'lls territory
but i ain't scared of sh*t including your nickel-plated 9millie
i served you pussy ass crew with fists of fury
now you in the ER tryin to make up a good story
sitting wondering if that shatted elbow will eva heal correctly
or if ya niggas stern cracked in more then 3 places
fool, i gave ya an opportunity to walk away peacefully
but you didn't listen, which is why ya punk ass lay in the street unconcious bleedin
time to recognize this white kid hangin in the streets
born raised in white communites, though i'm walkin around with a mothaf*ckiin hellafied gangsta lean
nigga, next time you wanna beef just think of the consequences
cause next time i'ma end this with your bitch ass dead in a casket

cestoz · 02-22-2007, 03:58 PM

its like flesh of my flesh-era DMX, some real ****! :-)

carvinC980t_kid · 02-22-2007, 07:49 PM

haha yeah dude, straight up. my friend makes mad beats when we sit around high in his mansion... so he is going to make me some beats and i'm going to get one of two of my hustlin friends to lay down some stuff with me cause i got a bro who can freestyle like mad all day.

robmcgrail · 02-22-2007, 07:57 PM

your joking right? There not lyrics, there just a teen "gangsta" angst rant.

Oh dear. ....

oh dear.

carvinC980t_kid · 02-22-2007, 08:09 PM

no, its a real fight i got in. i'm sure if you look around in one of the "what made you smile threads" you'll be able to read about it. or ask Timee... he would probably love to tell my story cause he loves hearing about my adventures!

its real though! my friends apartment is about 10mins away from being in the real hood in Indianapolis indiana.

Timeé · 02-22-2007, 08:11 PM

hah yeah its true. but this guy is becomin less like Jack Reacher every day.

carvinC980t_kid · 02-22-2007, 08:15 PM

less like jack reacher?!?!?! that hurts tim. that hurts. but then again... he was a military police... the most disliked person in the military!so i don't wanna be too much like him

Juzzza · 02-23-2007, 08:20 AM

Breaking things...

Breaking down, breaking in and breaking up
breaking down, breaking in and breaking up

I've been calling your name
I've been sucked into this dark and twisted tryst
I''ve been calling your name
I've been searching for someone or something or some time or some shift that I can blame

you've been relying on your luck
your good friends don't seem to give a ****
I've been playing on your trust
my heart's now ruled by my lust

headline heartbreaker
headline heartbreaker

I've been calling in vain
I've been sucked in and spat out whole again
I've been calling your name
I've been searching for someone or something or some time or some shift that I can blame

you've been relying on your luck
your good friends don't seem to give a ****
I've been playing on your trust
my heart's now ruled by my lust

headline heartbreaker
headline heartbreaker

breaking down, breaking in and breaking up
breaking down, breaking in and breaking up
breaking down, breaking in and breaking up
breaking down, breaking in and breaking up

carvinC980t_kid · 02-23-2007, 10:13 PM

Ok, this song is violant, and not about me. the big long "*******" things are because i don't wanna be typing out a gangs name all over the net. this is a song i wrote for a dude i know when we were talking about a situation that happened and he said it'd make one hell of a rap song. then i showed him some of my work and he gave me permission to use his **** in a song as long as i was showin people the name association.

something about writing true stories that aren't all about love, depression, or the normal sh*t just gives me great pleasures. its like writing a history book. sh*t happens that people don't like, but its something that can't be ignored. i wrote the song to have a lesson, one that is really only applied to those in the hood, but still... there is a real moral to the story.. even if you don't like it haha!

and to make some of the vocab understandable... a "choppa" or "chopper" is a nick name for a "tommy gun" and/or Thompson submachine gun.

"hold up, hold up, turn here, turn here. this is where that mothaf*cka lives"
"who? the one who took dat cash?"
"hells ya, bitch owe me 17 hundred washingtons"
"lets get our money back, nigga"
"ah ha, time to do work"

got the homie from the block, yeah he's tottin that glock
rollin deap in the caddy, two choppas in the trunk
always ridin real slow, cause we smoke hella blunts
and it's times like these, just don't wanna get caught
just picked up 3 keys of that hella fine weed
and its snowin in the car, just picked up a QP
creep up to the house, roll to a slow
jump out the ride, no time to for a last word
choppas droppin heat in the niggas cross the street
by standers wonderin when the relentless poppin's gon' cease
take the bleeding brothers money, shoes, clothes, and house keys
make it quick, make it bloody, make the brotahs life cease
hop back in the lac, roll quick, cross the tracks
post up in the dark, time to count the cash.
yeah, the homie just broke even and got a new hat
days like this make any real ********* brotha smile
cause you know it's dat hood life, all about do or die

now, let this lesson be told that the hoods bout respect
when you cross the line you know yo sh*ts outta wack
cause any real hood boy know it'll getcha a** capped.
i'ma ****** mothaf*cka and it's time to recogonize it
b*tch. respect it, don't mess wit, or you guaranteed a few more clips
will enter you and yo family

carvinC980t_kid · 02-23-2007, 10:14 PM

Juzzza, i like your lyrics a lot! you are a talented individual

carvinC980t_kid · 02-25-2007, 03:17 AM

one more song. just wrote this one, because there was a point i wanted to get across, which is the purpose of the second paragraph. this song is really meaningless otherwise, but i know most the people think my hip hop songs are stupid or that the life i rap about is wack, but the reason i respect the life that some of my friends live is because they don't know anything else.

if you get anything out of anything i've ever said, know this. the 2nd paragraph is COMPLETELY TRUE about a lot of the people i know who live in the bad parts of Indianapolis, detroit, cincinnati, st. louis, chicago, and surrounding large cities around. also, the end of the last paragraph has a lot of meaning in it also.

this rhyme is so that the sheltered people can realize how people end up in the places they are. really, you can't just move out and start a clean life.. it isn't that simple.

Drinkin’ 40’s before AA meetings, don’t give a ****
It’s the government who’s tellin’ me I need to stop
And I’m here to keep my PO from cruisin’ round my block
But he knows that I’m constantly pushin’ that rock
Which is why I’m paying the mother ****in feds off
So I move key after key, always bringin’ in the G’s
I’m fresh off the block, just like tupac
Said, I know it’s a good day if none of my homies got popped
Cause that’s the truth of this life, like it or not

The media make this game look so ruff
But what they don’t show ya is why the situation’s so tuff
It’s a hell of a lot more then just tryin to sell rock
You see, most my homies there out on the block
Realize, we’re all these mother ****ers really got
Half my homies ain’t never even met their dad
The other half’s mad their dads doing life in the pin
Their mommas done their best, but it’s never enough
Cause livin’ off food stamps will make any kid corrupt
Some of my boys watched their own mothers get shot
It’s a vicious vicious cycle, livin in the hood on any block
Seen young bucks rob just so their mom can pay the bills
It all starts with the little **** and goes from there
An once a boy learns to pull a trigger in the streets
He better realize he just signed a life contract to carry heat
Cause that’s the truth of this life, like it or not

So we cut lines before NA meetings, then smoke an L
Flip the bird to the bitch who sent us to rehab
Pull a pistol on our PO for tellin’ us we need a job
But that bitch just mad my homie ****in his daughter
He knows that’s where she got rims for her impala
Cause any lady who want ta ride has to ride fly as ****
So we move them keys to bring in more G’s
Who ever said a brother could have to much money
That’s the reason we incorporate yay in the business
So when we fresh off the block we can kick back for a shot
Of hennessy cause it’s time to get ****ed up
cause life on the block is far from fun
but a nigga take pride in puttin shoes on his son
from the money he makes by sellin this rock
my niggas don't do it for themselves
they do it for the money
cause ain't no little kid deserve to live life with an empty stomach

Juzzza · 02-25-2007, 09:34 AM

Thanks, Carvin... same back at ya.

Do you ever enter those rap duels?

Ships_Were_Sailin · 02-25-2007, 04:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by carvinC980t_kid

but a nigga take pride in puttin shoes on his son
from the money he makes by sellin this rock
my niggas don't do it for themselves
they do it for the money
cause ain't no little deserve to live life with an empty stomach

awsome lines there, so clever. all the lyrics are really good (2nd paragraph specially), but those last lines are my fav

carvinC980t_kid · 02-25-2007, 04:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Juzzza

Thanks, Carvin... same back at ya.

Do you ever enter those rap duels?

thanks man! but nah, i don't battle with anyone unless its just a friend. i don't really rap much, but besides to myself. i mainly just write my rhymes and spit em while writing them other then that i don't perform them. maybe i'll have to enter a rap battle sometime and get schooled!!!

carvinC980t_kid · 02-25-2007, 04:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Ships_Were_Sailin

awsome lines there, so clever. all the lyrics are really good (2nd paragraph specially), but those last lines are my fav

hey thanks man! appreciate it! i forgot to put the word "kid" after "little" incase you were confused! thanks again man

PenguinBoy · 02-25-2007, 07:35 PM

Yohoho, if we're doing the genre dialect thing, i just came out with some blues lyrics...

Verry simple:

Good guy's blues

If I'd Lied
i'd all be alright
There ain't no prize
For being a good guy

There ain't no man in the sky
Ain't no one gonna call me wise

If I'd Stolen
It'd all be golden
The rich man'd a'toldem:
"It's alright boys, I got enough to last me...
till I'm olden.

Oh, there ain't no man in the sky
Ain't no one gonna call me wise

If i'd Killed
IT'd all be swell
Bury him under a hill
Or leave him where he fell

Man there ain't no man in the sky
Ain't no one gonna call me wise

If I'd raped
It'd all be great
Put her mouth in tape
I'd be all powerful in the middle of hate

There ain't no man in the sky
Ain't no one gonna call me wise

But I can't lie
But I can't steal
But I can't rape
But I can't Kill

Even though there ain't no man, in no over-hanging sky
I got no balls, I got no balls, I can't be nothing but a good guy.

BIG TIM · 02-25-2007, 10:58 PM

^love it mate really strong. "aint no man, in no over-hanging sky"

Im trying to get a positive out of a **** sitaution so i'll will share with you some thoughts that a combination of people from the opposite sex has led me to.

Questions you cant answer

Give it back to me
what I handed you was precious
I thought you gave something to me
but it seems you can do without this.

what the f*ck would do this
I can't hurt you at all, but your pains never miss
what part of this is to my advantage
what part of this was risked by you
what part of you have I taken,
or is there nothing left to give.

I can't be with someone
who can hurt me this easily
I can't be with you
but don't want you to leave me
and I cant be alone
no, not alone
cos its I who really scares me.

How can someone not feel
why am I always left hurting
I dont want to feel this anymore.
Don't give me sight then make me blind.
Its like waking before dying.

Tears drag the pain like ploughs to the fields
I want to be a rock but the scaring will not yield.
the only way I try and mend at all.
is to turn tears into ink.

nothing helps, no one helps,
I can't help myself.
what am I doing, why am I so sad.
why am I always left to think.

I can't be with someone
who can hurt me this easily
I can't be with you
but don't want you to leave me
and I cant be alone
no, not alone
cos its I who really scares me.

not alone.....
please not alone....

carvinC980t_kid · 02-26-2007, 12:05 AM

penguin boy and Big Tim, i like both of your songs! excellent stuff!

Afterall · 02-26-2007, 04:40 PM

Slow Down

I don't know when I built these walls
but I built them tall and I built them strong
Inside them I'm so small
There is a little boy that I can't destroy

Chorus
Slow down
I'm making up time
save me
I'm falling out of line
and you pick me up
but its me that takes you away

They told me these stories are old
and their in my head, but they can't be told
They came to me in another life
and their on mind mind they cut me like a knife

Chorus

--------------------------------
The End Has Won Again

Hop on
its a free for all
Its the bright lights
Its the curtain call
There is a time to rise
and a time fall, its your call

This room is swallowing me
I have a scar on my face
I have this worn suitcase
My hope is receding
just living to grow this money tree

Before I begin, the end has won again
but the sun's on that horizon
Before I begin, the end has won again
and the suns on that horizon

You can listen to "Slow Down" at www.afterallweb.com...its a live version...sound quality is okay.

cestoz · 03-02-2007, 08:42 PM

"ghosts"

theres only lovers and undertakers,
up at this hour, as they labour
in the graveyards of their minds,
you show me yours and il show you mine

my love if your half-truths were only half true
if your knives were blunt and your skies not so blue
because theres nothing else id rather not do
than say goodbye to you

i dig holes in places no one knows
i dig holes but how you meant to bury..
i dig holes in places no one knows
i dig holes but how you meant to bury ghosts?

theres always lovers and undertakers
up at this hour, waking the neighbours
as they lay across their mines,
out of sight but not out of mind

my love if your half-truths were only half true
if your knives werent so sharp and your eyes not so blue
this would be easier to do
trying to say goodbye to you...

i dog holes in places no one knows
i dig holes but how you meant to bury...
i dig holes in places no one knows
i dig holes but how you meant to bury ghosts?
(repeat)

its solo acoustic at the moment, as with everything else i do, but unusually, i have big plans for this one, including drums... and sarah mclachlan. (she would be perfect for the chorus duet bit i have figured out... iv myspaced her, but she hasnt replied yet, funny that...) :-)

cille · 03-02-2007, 08:52 PM

^that's really nice work!

carvinC980t_kid · 03-03-2007, 04:13 AM

this is a little something i threw together. got my buddy sitting in our studio at his house right now trying to make me a beat i like. starts off with a little paino and then a nice bass beat comes steady in over the paino with alittle high hat and snare.

NOTE: this is a "rough draft" if you will. just getting the main idea and feeling of what direction i want to take this song. nothing has been placed in a set order or anything yet. this is my song telling all of those who don't like what i do to suck a mean d*ck. ps. nothing is reffering to telling me how to live drug wise which i'm sure most of you are thinking

i'm sick of hearing how i'm wasting away my life
i'm sick of hearing about what i should do to make it right
i'm not ready to go to college
or starting a steady life
i don't want a steady job just to live my life "right"
f*ck the picture perfect life
that sh*t ain't for me
cause life ain't about money or material things
its bigger then what society thinks
and no motherf*cker can buy me or what i belive
cause i'ma live my life right
atleast the right way for me
and if you don't like it
thats fine with me
just keep your one-sided comments away from me
cause if you try to tie me down
i'm bound to break free
bound to break resistance
and everything you want for me
cause i'm going live my the way that suits me
that's the right way to live
atleast the right way for me

its time to go far
this time i'm shooting for the stars
i'm going to live my life right
live it with no disregard
f*ck what you say
f*ck your thoughts and your feelings
this is me, so take it or leave it, you feel me?

maccas81 · 03-09-2007, 04:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PenguinBoy

Yohoho, if we're doing the genre dialect thing, i just came out with some blues lyrics...

Verry simple:

Good guy's blues

If I'd Lied
i'd all be alright
There ain't no prize
For being a good guy

There ain't no man in the sky
Ain't no one gonna call me wise

If I'd Stolen
It'd all be golden
The rich man'd a'toldem:
"It's alright boys, I got enough to last me...
till I'm olden.

Oh, there ain't no man in the sky
Ain't no one gonna call me wise

If i'd Killed
IT'd all be swell
Bury him under a hill
Or leave him where he fell

Man there ain't no man in the sky
Ain't no one gonna call me wise

If I'd raped
It'd all be great
Put her mouth in tape
I'd be all powerful in the middle of hate

There ain't no man in the sky
Ain't no one gonna call me wise

But I can't lie
But I can't steal
But I can't rape
But I can't Kill

Even though there ain't no man, in no over-hanging sky
I got no balls, I got no balls, I can't be nothing but a good guy.

love the lyrics peng-meister, typical high standard that we have come to expect from you, well done mate!

Juzzza · 03-12-2007, 10:16 AM

Muppets

We watch this war
through a lense
we don't know the rules
or how they bend

these chicks
getting banged online
in movies now
demanding a million at a time

and it takes much more than a tie-dye
your belly button rings and your wide eyes
you can eat a ton of crunchy nut roast
and play your bongos from the gold coast

and what the **** you doing with a didgeridoo
when aborigine means nothing to you
you think your so hip when your watching the whales
and then you go buy your ugg boots in the january sales

your cans are recycled and your papers bundled up
but how much money was that billabong top?

you got your dreadlocks
organic knitted socks
smoking roll-ups 'cause it's anti-corporation
you think the tattoo on your lower-back means origination

what does that say about us, we are all clones
there is no civil in this ization
it's all about profits and privatization

Livo · 03-12-2007, 01:34 PM

grey irish sunday rain
it seeps into your bones
it runs down suburban windows
crying babies, ringing phones

it's times like this i feel the buzz
cos there's this chick inside of me
she's idealistic, wild and bright
she's just dying to break free

unzip your skin and let me in!
but try my best i can't succeed
cos i've been a rock, i've been paper
but you've always been a scissors to me

and i wanna let her out
unleash her on the world
she'd crash into this dark grey place
and i'd watch her colours just unfurl

unzip your skin and let me in!
but try my best i can't succeed
cos i've been a rock, i've been paper
but you've always been a scissors to me

cos we'll never be stars without some night
but we'll never shine without some light

02-22-2007, 05:36 AM	#906
carvinC980t_kid Eskimo Regular Join Date: May 2006 Location: noblesville indiana, aka people with too much money producing ignorant children Posts: 2,662	This is a little somethin i just threw together about a fight i got in over at my friends apt in a rougher part of the town he moved to. if any of ya remember the story cause i know i shared it... i asked some dudes directions and they started being rude, so i just walked away till the had to start harassing me. the lyrics tell the rest of what happened. niggas frontin like thugs standin round with their clicks but when you fck with me it becomes true gangsta sht i gone shown up to the gun show with nothin but fists son, it's time to realize you in ova ya head yeah, i did hop out my ride in ya'lls territory but i ain't scared of sht including your nickel-plated 9millie i served you pussy ass crew with fists of fury now you in the ER tryin to make up a good story sitting wondering if that shatted elbow will eva heal correctly or if ya niggas stern cracked in more then 3 places fool, i gave ya an opportunity to walk away peacefully but you didn't listen, which is why ya punk ass lay in the street unconcious bleedin time to recognize this white kid hangin in the streets born raised in white communites, though i'm walkin around with a mothafckiin hellafied gangsta lean nigga, next time you wanna beef just think of the consequences cause next time i'ma end this with your bitch ass dead in a casket __________________ "And live for the moment, Lord knows I'm gon' die And when I get to hell, Lord knows I'm gon' fry" young jeezy - i luv it

02-22-2007, 03:58 PM	#907
cestoz Eskimo Regular Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 132	its like flesh of my flesh-era DMX, some real ****! :-) __________________ my my myspace

02-22-2007, 07:49 PM	#908
carvinC980t_kid Eskimo Regular Join Date: May 2006 Location: noblesville indiana, aka people with too much money producing ignorant children Posts: 2,662	haha yeah dude, straight up. my friend makes mad beats when we sit around high in his mansion... so he is going to make me some beats and i'm going to get one of two of my hustlin friends to lay down some stuff with me cause i got a bro who can freestyle like mad all day. __________________ "And live for the moment, Lord knows I'm gon' die And when I get to hell, Lord knows I'm gon' fry" young jeezy - i luv it

02-22-2007, 08:09 PM	#910
carvinC980t_kid Eskimo Regular Join Date: May 2006 Location: noblesville indiana, aka people with too much money producing ignorant children Posts: 2,662	no, its a real fight i got in. i'm sure if you look around in one of the "what made you smile threads" you'll be able to read about it. or ask Timee... he would probably love to tell my story cause he loves hearing about my adventures! its real though! my friends apartment is about 10mins away from being in the real hood in Indianapolis indiana. __________________ "And live for the moment, Lord knows I'm gon' die And when I get to hell, Lord knows I'm gon' fry" young jeezy - i luv it

02-22-2007, 08:11 PM	#911
Timeé Intello Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Co. Donegal, Ireland. Posts: 2,435	hah yeah its true. but this guy is becomin less like Jack Reacher every day. __________________ Wasted and wounded, it ain't what the moon did Got what I paid for now See ya tomorrow, hey Frank can I borrow A couple of bucks from you?

02-15-2007, 11:03 PM	#903
johnnyappleseed Eskimo Baby Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 25	just adding to the fun its been 14 days down swear one day i'll come around till then im just wasting my days she said she is gone i said girl move along cause i dont need your kind around here no more hey you there i think you forgot to care about something other then yourself everyone just stares into the sun trying to become blind to everything momma said boy wont you go do something with yourself you dont want to end up just like your pa and daddy said boy dont end up like me driving truck for the rest of your life what the **** we got to move along got to keep your feet trucking along cause if you stand in one place to long you will be come crazy you got to work it out got to work it all out you got to work away the pain thats what they selling you man just try to stay strong but somedays are so long i try and i try to just get along now its 15 days down still staring at the ground as i walk past a faded love.

02-16-2007, 08:34 PM	#905
johnnyappleseed Eskimo Baby Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 25	Yeah he also arm wrestles on the side. Hey bob dont make me come over your house and beat you up. Why dont you put your song up about Andy.

02-22-2007, 07:57 PM	#909
robmcgrail Lord of Lovely Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 198	your joking right? There not lyrics, there just a teen "gangsta" angst rant. Oh dear. .... oh dear.

02-22-2007, 08:15 PM	#912
carvinC980t_kid Eskimo Regular Join Date: May 2006 Location: noblesville indiana, aka people with too much money producing ignorant children Posts: 2,662	less like jack reacher?!?!?! that hurts tim. that hurts. but then again... he was a military police... the most disliked person in the military!so i don't wanna be too much like him __________________ "And live for the moment, Lord knows I'm gon' die And when I get to hell, Lord knows I'm gon' fry" young jeezy - i luv it

02-23-2007, 08:20 AM	#913
Juzzza Eskimo Regular Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Jersey Posts: 924	Breaking things... Breaking down, breaking in and breaking up breaking down, breaking in and breaking up I've been calling your name I've been sucked into this dark and twisted tryst I''ve been calling your name I've been searching for someone or something or some time or some shift that I can blame you've been relying on your luck your good friends don't seem to give a ** I've been playing on your trust my heart's now ruled by my lust headline heartbreaker headline heartbreaker I've been calling in vain I've been sucked in and spat out whole again I've been calling your name I've been searching for someone or something or some time or some shift that I can blame you've been relying on your luck your good friends don't seem to give a ** I've been playing on your trust my heart's now ruled by my lust headline heartbreaker headline heartbreaker breaking down, breaking in and breaking up breaking down, breaking in and breaking up breaking down, breaking in and breaking up breaking down, breaking in and breaking up __________________ www.justinthorne.com ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 'Ninjas killed my family, I need money for Kung-Fu lessons'... homeless guy's sign, New York (May 2005) http://www.myspace.com/justinthorne http://www.myspace.com/jtintheshadows

02-23-2007, 10:13 PM	#914
carvinC980t_kid Eskimo Regular Join Date: May 2006 Location: noblesville indiana, aka people with too much money producing ignorant children Posts: 2,662	Ok, this song is violant, and not about me. the big long "*****" things are because i don't wanna be typing out a gangs name all over the net. this is a song i wrote for a dude i know when we were talking about a situation that happened and he said it'd make one hell of a rap song. then i showed him some of my work and he gave me permission to use his ** in a song as long as i was showin people the name association. something about writing true stories that aren't all about love, depression, or the normal sht just gives me great pleasures. its like writing a history book. sht happens that people don't like, but its something that can't be ignored. i wrote the song to have a lesson, one that is really only applied to those in the hood, but still... there is a real moral to the story.. even if you don't like it haha! and to make some of the vocab understandable... a "choppa" or "chopper" is a nick name for a "tommy gun" and/or Thompson submachine gun. "hold up, hold up, turn here, turn here. this is where that mothafcka lives" "who? the one who took dat cash?" "hells ya, bitch owe me 17 hundred washingtons" "lets get our money back, nigga" "ah ha, time to do work" got the homie from the block, yeah he's tottin that glock rollin deap in the caddy, two choppas in the trunk always ridin real slow, cause we smoke hella blunts and it's times like these, just don't wanna get caught just picked up 3 keys of that hella fine weed and its snowin in the car, just picked up a QP creep up to the house, roll to a slow jump out the ride, no time to for a last word choppas droppin heat in the niggas cross the street by standers wonderin when the relentless poppin's gon' cease take the bleeding brothers money, shoes, clothes, and house keys make it quick, make it bloody, make the brotahs life cease hop back in the lac, roll quick, cross the tracks post up in the dark, time to count the cash. yeah, the homie just broke even and got a new hat days like this make any real ******** brotha smile cause you know it's dat hood life, all about do or die now, let this lesson be told that the hoods bout respect when you cross the line you know yo shts outta wack cause any real hood boy know it'll getcha a* capped. i'ma ****** mothafcka and it's time to recogonize it btch. respect it, don't mess wit, or you guaranteed a few more clips will enter you and yo family __________________ "And live for the moment, Lord knows I'm gon' die And when I get to hell, Lord knows I'm gon' fry" young jeezy - i luv it Last edited by carvinC980t_kid; 02-23-2007 at 10:19 PM.

02-23-2007, 10:14 PM	#915
carvinC980t_kid Eskimo Regular Join Date: May 2006 Location: noblesville indiana, aka people with too much money producing ignorant children Posts: 2,662	Juzzza, i like your lyrics a lot! you are a talented individual __________________ "And live for the moment, Lord knows I'm gon' die And when I get to hell, Lord knows I'm gon' fry" young jeezy - i luv it

02-25-2007, 03:17 AM	#916
carvinC980t_kid Eskimo Regular Join Date: May 2006 Location: noblesville indiana, aka people with too much money producing ignorant children Posts: 2,662	one more song. just wrote this one, because there was a point i wanted to get across, which is the purpose of the second paragraph. this song is really meaningless otherwise, but i know most the people think my hip hop songs are stupid or that the life i rap about is wack, but the reason i respect the life that some of my friends live is because they don't know anything else. if you get anything out of anything i've ever said, know this. the 2nd paragraph is COMPLETELY TRUE about a lot of the people i know who live in the bad parts of Indianapolis, detroit, cincinnati, st. louis, chicago, and surrounding large cities around. also, the end of the last paragraph has a lot of meaning in it also. this rhyme is so that the sheltered people can realize how people end up in the places they are. really, you can't just move out and start a clean life.. it isn't that simple. Drinkin’ 40’s before AA meetings, don’t give a ** It’s the government who’s tellin’ me I need to stop And I’m here to keep my PO from cruisin’ round my block But he knows that I’m constantly pushin’ that rock Which is why I’m paying the mother in feds off So I move key after key, always bringin’ in the G’s I’m fresh off the block, just like tupac Said, I know it’s a good day if none of my homies got popped Cause that’s the truth of this life, like it or not The media make this game look so ruff But what they don’t show ya is why the situation’s so tuff It’s a hell of a lot more then just tryin to sell rock You see, most my homies there out on the block Realize, we’re all these mother ers really got Half my homies ain’t never even met their dad The other half’s mad their dads doing life in the pin Their mommas done their best, but it’s never enough Cause livin’ off food stamps will make any kid corrupt Some of my boys watched their own mothers get shot It’s a vicious vicious cycle, livin in the hood on any block Seen young bucks rob just so their mom can pay the bills It all starts with the little and goes from there An once a boy learns to pull a trigger in the streets He better realize he just signed a life contract to carry heat Cause that’s the truth of this life, like it or not So we cut lines before NA meetings, then smoke an L Flip the bird to the bitch who sent us to rehab Pull a pistol on our PO for tellin’ us we need a job But that bitch just mad my homie in his daughter He knows that’s where she got rims for her impala Cause any lady who want ta ride has to ride fly as So we move them keys to bring in more G’s Who ever said a brother could have to much money That’s the reason we incorporate yay in the business So when we fresh off the block we can kick back for a shot Of hennessy cause it’s time to get *ed up cause life on the block is far from fun but a nigga take pride in puttin shoes on his son from the money he makes by sellin this rock my niggas don't do it for themselves they do it for the money cause ain't no little kid deserve to live life with an empty stomach __________________ "And live for the moment, Lord knows I'm gon' die And when I get to hell, Lord knows I'm gon' fry" young jeezy - i luv it Last edited by carvinC980t_kid; 02-25-2007 at 04:55 PM.*

02-25-2007, 09:34 AM	#917
Juzzza Eskimo Regular Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Jersey Posts: 924	Thanks, Carvin... same back at ya. Do you ever enter those rap duels? __________________ www.justinthorne.com ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 'Ninjas killed my family, I need money for Kung-Fu lessons'... homeless guy's sign, New York (May 2005) http://www.myspace.com/justinthorne http://www.myspace.com/jtintheshadows

02-25-2007, 07:35 PM	#921
PenguinBoy Appreciative Minion Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Harlington, Beds, UK. Posts: 1,695	Yohoho, if we're doing the genre dialect thing, i just came out with some blues lyrics... Verry simple: Good guy's blues If I'd Lied i'd all be alright There ain't no prize For being a good guy There ain't no man in the sky Ain't no one gonna call me wise If I'd Stolen It'd all be golden The rich man'd a'toldem: "It's alright boys, I got enough to last me... till I'm olden. Oh, there ain't no man in the sky Ain't no one gonna call me wise If i'd Killed IT'd all be swell Bury him under a hill Or leave him where he fell Man there ain't no man in the sky Ain't no one gonna call me wise If I'd raped It'd all be great Put her mouth in tape I'd be all powerful in the middle of hate There ain't no man in the sky Ain't no one gonna call me wise But I can't lie But I can't steal But I can't rape But I can't Kill Even though there ain't no man, in no over-hanging sky I got no balls, I got no balls, I can't be nothing but a good guy. __________________ Good eyes see nothing to shoot, Good Feet Feel good giving up good boots. Myspace - My Music - My Last.fm Profile- My LiveJournal - I'm Jacob

02-25-2007, 10:58 PM	#922
BIG TIM Polar bear Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: currently Newcastle, England Posts: 400	^love it mate really strong. "aint no man, in no over-hanging sky" Im trying to get a positive out of a ** sitaution so i'll will share with you some thoughts that a combination of people from the opposite sex has led me to. Questions you cant answer** Give it back to me what I handed you was precious I thought you gave something to me but it seems you can do without this. what the f*ck would do this I can't hurt you at all, but your pains never miss what part of this is to my advantage what part of this was risked by you what part of you have I taken, or is there nothing left to give. I can't be with someone who can hurt me this easily I can't be with you but don't want you to leave me and I cant be alone no, not alone cos its I who really scares me. How can someone not feel why am I always left hurting I dont want to feel this anymore. Don't give me sight then make me blind. Its like waking before dying. Tears drag the pain like ploughs to the fields I want to be a rock but the scaring will not yield. the only way I try and mend at all. is to turn tears into ink. nothing helps, no one helps, I can't help myself. what am I doing, why am I so sad. why am I always left to think. I can't be with someone who can hurt me this easily I can't be with you but don't want you to leave me and I cant be alone no, not alone cos its I who really scares me. not alone..... please not alone.... __________________ Stars don't have mirrors because true beauty doesn't need them .

02-26-2007, 12:05 AM	#923
carvinC980t_kid Eskimo Regular Join Date: May 2006 Location: noblesville indiana, aka people with too much money producing ignorant children Posts: 2,662	penguin boy and Big Tim, i like both of your songs! excellent stuff! __________________ "And live for the moment, Lord knows I'm gon' die And when I get to hell, Lord knows I'm gon' fry" young jeezy - i luv it

02-26-2007, 04:40 PM	#924
Afterall Eskimo Baby Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 14	Slow Down & The End Has Won Again Slow Down I don't know when I built these walls but I built them tall and I built them strong Inside them I'm so small There is a little boy that I can't destroy Chorus Slow down I'm making up time save me I'm falling out of line and you pick me up but its me that takes you away They told me these stories are old and their in my head, but they can't be told They came to me in another life and their on mind mind they cut me like a knife Chorus -------------------------------- The End Has Won Again Hop on its a free for all Its the bright lights Its the curtain call There is a time to rise and a time fall, its your call This room is swallowing me I have a scar on my face I have this worn suitcase My hope is receding just living to grow this money tree Before I begin, the end has won again but the sun's on that horizon Before I begin, the end has won again and the suns on that horizon You can listen to "Slow Down" at www.afterallweb.com...its a live version...sound quality is okay.

03-02-2007, 08:42 PM	#925
cestoz Eskimo Regular Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 132	"ghosts" theres only lovers and undertakers, up at this hour, as they labour in the graveyards of their minds, you show me yours and il show you mine my love if your half-truths were only half true if your knives were blunt and your skies not so blue because theres nothing else id rather not do than say goodbye to you i dig holes in places no one knows i dig holes but how you meant to bury.. i dig holes in places no one knows i dig holes but how you meant to bury ghosts? theres always lovers and undertakers up at this hour, waking the neighbours as they lay across their mines, out of sight but not out of mind my love if your half-truths were only half true if your knives werent so sharp and your eyes not so blue this would be easier to do trying to say goodbye to you... i dog holes in places no one knows i dig holes but how you meant to bury... i dig holes in places no one knows i dig holes but how you meant to bury ghosts? (repeat) its solo acoustic at the moment, as with everything else i do, but unusually, i have big plans for this one, including drums... and sarah mclachlan. (she would be perfect for the chorus duet bit i have figured out... iv myspaced her, but she hasnt replied yet, funny that...) :-) __________________ my my myspace

03-02-2007, 08:52 PM	#926
cille creepycute Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Copenhagen Posts: 15,333	^that's really nice work! __________________ Yeah

03-03-2007, 04:13 AM	#927
carvinC980t_kid Eskimo Regular Join Date: May 2006 Location: noblesville indiana, aka people with too much money producing ignorant children Posts: 2,662	this is a little something i threw together. got my buddy sitting in our studio at his house right now trying to make me a beat i like. starts off with a little paino and then a nice bass beat comes steady in over the paino with alittle high hat and snare. NOTE: this is a "rough draft" if you will. just getting the main idea and feeling of what direction i want to take this song. nothing has been placed in a set order or anything yet. this is my song telling all of those who don't like what i do to suck a mean dck. ps. nothing is reffering to telling me how to live drug wise which i'm sure most of you are thinking i'm sick of hearing how i'm wasting away my life i'm sick of hearing about what i should do to make it right i'm not ready to go to college or starting a steady life i don't want a steady job just to live my life "right" fck the picture perfect life that sht ain't for me cause life ain't about money or material things its bigger then what society thinks and no motherfcker can buy me or what i belive cause i'ma live my life right atleast the right way for me and if you don't like it thats fine with me just keep your one-sided comments away from me cause if you try to tie me down i'm bound to break free bound to break resistance and everything you want for me cause i'm going live my the way that suits me that's the right way to live atleast the right way for me its time to go far this time i'm shooting for the stars i'm going to live my life right live it with no disregard fck what you say fck your thoughts and your feelings this is me, so take it or leave it, you feel me? __________________ "And live for the moment, Lord knows I'm gon' die And when I get to hell, Lord knows I'm gon' fry" young jeezy - i luv it Last edited by carvinC980t_kid; 03-03-2007 at 04:32 AM.

03-12-2007, 10:16 AM	#929
Juzzza Eskimo Regular Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Jersey Posts: 924	Muppets We watch this war through a lense we don't know the rules or how they bend these chicks getting banged online in movies now demanding a million at a time and it takes much more than a tie-dye your belly button rings and your wide eyes you can eat a ton of crunchy nut roast and play your bongos from the gold coast and what the **** you doing with a didgeridoo when aborigine means nothing to you you think your so hip when your watching the whales and then you go buy your ugg boots in the january sales your cans are recycled and your papers bundled up but how much money was that billabong top? you got your dreadlocks organic knitted socks smoking roll-ups 'cause it's anti-corporation you think the tattoo on your lower-back means origination what does that say about us, we are all clones there is no civil in this ization it's all about profits and privatization __________________ www.justinthorne.com ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 'Ninjas killed my family, I need money for Kung-Fu lessons'... homeless guy's sign, New York (May 2005) http://www.myspace.com/justinthorne http://www.myspace.com/jtintheshadows

03-12-2007, 01:34 PM	#930
Livo Eskimo Frames Expert Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: People's Republic of Cork Posts: 2,559	grey irish sunday rain it seeps into your bones it runs down suburban windows crying babies, ringing phones it's times like this i feel the buzz cos there's this chick inside of me she's idealistic, wild and bright she's just dying to break free unzip your skin and let me in! but try my best i can't succeed cos i've been a rock, i've been paper but you've always been a scissors to me and i wanna let her out unleash her on the world she'd crash into this dark grey place and i'd watch her colours just unfurl unzip your skin and let me in! but try my best i can't succeed cos i've been a rock, i've been paper but you've always been a scissors to me cos we'll never be stars without some night but we'll never shine without some light __________________ trying to find a little chaos in the order..