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04-01-2007, 08:45 PM | #1 |
Eskimo Baby
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 10
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Feedback on song
Hey I had to make this song for my class i would love some feedback its on myspace.com/chrisgant and is called fire demo.
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04-02-2007, 01:58 AM | #2 |
Inuit
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: UK
Posts: 2,458
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very impressed
really interesting style, interesting sound, interesting voice, interesting rhythms. |
04-02-2007, 02:20 PM | #3 |
eskiphotographer
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Newburyport, MA
Posts: 137
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k... here's my personal feedback... you asked for it! haha...
- the instrumentation sounds a bit too disconnected... very interesting timing and composition but it just sounds almost too disconnected to get into... then it comes into almost a reggae beat with "hold on tight..." and the two just don't transition well for me... - the effects on the vocals need to get tweaked for what i'm guessing is the chorus... a tad too loud and the last backup "fire" is def too loud... the first couple backup "fire" snippets are a good level but the last one pierces through too much... - the bass sound a tad too fat... know what i mean? - i think the recording could overall be improved if some serious mastering went into it... make everything punch a bit more and round out the eq on all tracks... with all that said i think it definitely has potential... very interesting tune... ****ty weather here in beantown eh? rain all week |
04-03-2007, 10:42 AM | #4 |
Eskimo Regular
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 132
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i listened to the wrong one, 'untitled', so this may not be much use.. but i loved it, its really good!
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