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05-08-2005, 02:36 AM | #391 |
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"Her mother won’t cry
Her mother won’t cry Her mother won’t cry" Aw, that's sad....I like it.
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05-08-2005, 06:38 PM | #392 |
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i love ur ballad of silence! so good
here's another one for y'all, a few too many metaphors, but it's bout comercialism and nature. ARIA DUNLOW "Keltic spirit trapped in the middle class genes of a suburban mongrel Children of the Soil segregated by plastic bags and illusions rule Aria Dunlow where art thou Art thou myth will i find you Ah Low Aria Dunlow Aria Dun Aria Dun Aria Dunlow When frozen Grass Cracks under bare feet Minions cease drinking blood A fire burns In the hand of an old man lost in the hills wandring Aria Dunlow where art thou Art thou myth will i find you Ah Low Aria Dunlow Aria Dun Aria Dun Aria Dunlow solo bridge chorus" i know i spelt celtic with a "K" i like it like that, don't even know why
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05-09-2005, 12:17 AM | #393 |
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Lately I've started spelling cool "kewl" just because I like it.
I loved the whole song, but this was my favorite line: "When frozen Grass Cracks under bare feet Minions cease drinking blood A fire burns In the hand of an old man lost in the hills wandring" There's something about the thought of what frozen blades of grass feel like beneath your bare feet that is very thought-provoking and kinda eery. How on EARTH you thought of that line is beyond me! Nice work :-)
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05-09-2005, 03:28 AM | #394 |
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I liked ARIA DUNLOW, there's nothing such as too many metaphors
Also, just to let you know, Ballad of Silence is ficticious, but still real. It's about abuse. I wrote it as a tribute to all the people who have the courage and strength to get out of them. I also wrote it to reach people still in abuse, and help encourage them to get out. The first verse tells how she feels and about her leaving. The second is her thinking back about how she thought it was all her fault. The third is about how he would hit her, and tell her it is for her good, then say he's sorry, but not for long. The choruses are her questioning her motives. The end is that she found out it was the right thing to do. The whole mother won't cry thing, it's that her family is not going to hate her or look down on her for this, but to love her no matter what and that this was a good thing. And even though I am a guy, I do know abuse, my first and only girlfriend verbably abused me a lot, so I do know what it's like. |
05-09-2005, 04:22 PM | #395 |
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Thanks allot!
cracks under bare feet... kinda got the idea from people doing stuff in bare feet so they "connect" (lol) to the ground, and 2ndly for walking to school on a frosty morning, and grass just kinda cracks under ur feet and it's so yummy... "there's nothing such as too many metaphors" hmmm i dno, i don't mind my song being an enigma but sometimes i write stuff and even i forget what it's actually about. plus, music for the people probably should be understood.
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05-10-2005, 12:20 AM | #397 |
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I'm actually still going through the phase where I'm writing random lyrics, and random music, but not finding ways to put the two together just yet. I still need more practice :-)
I like writing lyrics for the self-expression. For some reason I can't write a poem to save my life.
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05-10-2005, 10:47 AM | #398 |
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Lyrics are the best way to self express i think! I always feel so much better when ive sat down and written something!
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The song is good although the verse was a lot like Snow Patrol's 'Light Up'... you could almost sing the chorus along to your verse, but there is no disguising your awesome voice talent man, exceptional stuff... I saw your stuff over at Garageband, it would have been cool to have put it in the comp, they would have loved your voice.
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05-10-2005, 10:27 PM | #401 |
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LIVO!!!!!!!!
awwwwwwwww!! "I WONDER "IF"" in the dark room is tho bloody bestest!
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05-11-2005, 08:23 AM | #403 |
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Hey Ben,
It is free, you simply have to do enough review pairs of other songs in order to upload and enter one of your own. I think you have to review twenty pairs, which is actually good fun anyway. Then your song gets ten reviews and if they are good, you go into a second round, then a third and then you get the chance to win some cool prizes. There is also a ranking system and your tune may get listed based on lyrics, your vocals, guitars, best movie soundtrack potential, best chill-out track and so on. If you're lucky (or just good, in your case) you may get one of these: I've been around GB for years and having listened (and even been ranked in the top twenty) to the best, I honestly think you will kick ass there. Do it man. PM me if you need any more info. Here is my page: http://www.garageband.com/artist/justinthorne JT
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new song which is as yet untiltled. Comments and criticism appreciated as always -
Thinking of the things you’d say, and photographs that fade away, Memories of June, I am bleeding everyday, for the one that got away, Its winter now, its over Remember your hands upon my chest, but those echoes now rest, Thought they would always echo I feel like my heart has drowned, in petrol rainbows on the ground, Pictures of you. I have always been a coward when it comes to you You are so beautiful - thats all I have so far but I will complete it soon
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*coughI'mstillwaitingforasongaboutmecough*
it's beatiful Nate. as ever. love ur new siggie.
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*blush* thanks..but they are not.
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05-12-2005, 08:50 AM | #409 |
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*sigh* oh well why would they be really..
who's that lass? do I know I her?....
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*bangs my head against that wall* doooooooh....of course I remember Joey. thought u were over her?
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worse? it would have been better. she wouldnt have broken ur heart.
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05-12-2005, 09:10 AM | #414 |
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yeah I know, but I wouldnt be me if my heart wasn't permanently in pieces, and she is so beautiful.
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Nathan! forget her! think about fatsy....
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No I will not, and he is a CAT! Contrary to popular belief I am not into bestiality.
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the cure have a song about cats...eeeeh love cats!
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05-12-2005, 09:27 AM | #418 |
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yes they do and it is the worst song the cure have ever done
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05-12-2005, 09:28 AM | #419 |
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I like it....*covers my eyes*
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05-12-2005, 10:37 AM | #420 |
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When I'm cold with the 'ness' of lonely I wrap sin around my shoulders like a cloak drink JD on ice like a bourbon fish and buy cigarettes even though I don't smoke leave the gentleman's club still empty my wallet light about one hundred or three I'm one of the suckers deluded to think 'hey, I think she really liked me' Maybe I'm just unlucky Maybe I'm a romantic I'm definitely hopeless but tonight I just need someone to smile at me
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