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12-05-2005, 08:11 PM | #631 |
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i'm afraid i have to agree with juzzaa. I'm not angry jarm... just dissappointed. i feel slightly offended that u think those terrible lyrics are worth posting, it's a sad day.
*tongue placed in cheek so hard that it actually hurts*
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12-06-2005, 06:53 PM | #632 |
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Winter’s Rose
A frozen rose, idly stationed far away, Sits with the Sun, above it glistening The blankets of snow, upon which it lay Begin to melt, oh this wondrous thing Look out, my friend, be still, be smart Over there, you see, a boy is listening To the thunderous beat of the Rose’s heart To the sound of old snow flakes twinkling My friend, it is you of a younger age Full of questions, full of questions To you this Rose is a magical mage Nothing so fine, has been seen for eons - But one question will lie with you beneath the grave Will thee still know thy Love when the seasons change? - The following winter the snow came down The Rose it grew three-fold, no, four It grew and grew each time the cold came ‘round For this truly is a Rose of Winter’s Law Whenever spring came, followed it Sun The snow went away, effortlessly You looked after it, like it was your own But one spring, you heard the wail of the banshee The end was nigh, not for the Rose, but you The night you died, we drank down our sorrows ‘Till the Sun came and the morning gave us dew We set about burying you - One question still lies with you beneath the grave Will thee still know thy Love when the seasons change? - The Rose now rests upon thy grave Under your guidance the Rose grows well The Rose is strong, you both were brave I’ll see you soon, my friend, thank-you, fare thee well
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12-06-2005, 08:14 PM | #633 |
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polar bears
shut out the cold wind freezing the air shut out the cold rain sparkling hair cold frost glitters on cars and the ground halation makes moon circles, rainbows so round maybe it's an arabian night or maybe it's just my turkish delight but solar glares hurt polar bears hotter embers warm the grate i remember colder, something yet more great distant memories of a distant past something to hold on to, something to last maybe it's an arabian night or maybe it's just my turkish delight but solar glares hurt polar bears
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12-07-2005, 05:32 AM | #634 |
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her wind
havent posted any lyrics in a spell. heres that remedy
her wind doesnt blow through my chimes her wind touches no hair of mine ill go out in her storm if i please and come out with a pair a scraped knees because i beg i beg for your love not your bed not even your touch and your fire well it dont worry me much you see your flames always cold to the touch are you ashamed? your life burns like it does are you ashamed? you see your heart turn to dust my rain waters no fields i can see but my rain can still water your eyes for me and theyll grow never this big again darling. theres a lot of picture to take in and your floods sweep my heart off to sea but my mind stays anchored safely to the ground where your rains fall the same air in which your winds will blow
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12-07-2005, 07:33 PM | #635 |
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her wind...so beautiful...did you write these words?
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12-07-2005, 08:14 PM | #636 | |
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her wind
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yea, i wrote them. and thanks alot for the compliment. im pretty reticent about telling people ive written anything--let alone i wrote a SONG. ive posted about 4 songs or so on here, and only one person outside the igloo has read them. *sigh*
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12-08-2005, 08:47 AM | #637 |
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you've got me questioning, what I have to offer
I don't feel worthless exactly, but wonder why I bother you've gone from angel to misery in double quick time and 'face like a slapped ass' is an appropriate line for everyone else, you're all smiles and light then you come home and bitch and I get ready to fight your friends are so lucky in the girl that they see you've got time enough for all, well, except for me my passions are a problem as they whisk me away now I'm scared to tell you when I'm off to play you say we are on wavelengths like chalk and cheese it's more like fighting a hurricane with a gentle breeze so it's really quite simple when you look at the facts instead of your light, I'm the bad man in black I'm tired of the whining, and ice in our bed **** off and find somone that makes you smile instead
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12-08-2005, 06:49 PM | #638 |
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hit me again
it's taken me a long time to realise they're not out to get me and they're not all spies people are bad and people are good i think that's something seldom understood white embers regain their flame and for all this i'll claim the blame hit me again, hit me again hit me again cos i can take it hit me again, hit me again hit me again, cos you won't break it it took me a while to stand up and shout but that's what the business is all about people can hear me through the walls through their ceilings and down the halls roasted crabs hissing in the bowl toasted and drab, pissing on my soul hit me again, hit me again hit me again, cos i can take it hit me again, hit me again hit me again, cos you won't break it stand straight and tall like pillars of rome stand straight and tall like statues unknown hit me again, hit me again hit me again, cos i can take it hit me again, hit me again hit me again, cos you won't break it
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12-08-2005, 07:23 PM | #639 |
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*sings along* Hit me baby one more time.....I'll get my coat.
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12-15-2005, 06:23 PM | #640 |
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The gentleness with which you play
Me by night, guitar by day But like the guitar, of me you bore And leave me cold upon your floor My fingers find the grooves I made From holding onto you I've held on far much longer Than you ever told me to And now my dreams lie shattered You're not the man I knew Suddenly notes seem out of tune And leave a wave of blue And as these chords wash over me My heart begins to ache And fingers slip from worn out grooves I fought so hard to make So now my grip is failing I cant just sit here waiting Enough with all the aching I will miss you...
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12-15-2005, 06:28 PM | #641 |
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The Talents of Friends
They pick you up when you fall down Remove the obstruction from the ground Wipe the tears that streak your face Return you to your former grace Hold you close when things get rough Remind you that you're just as tough Forgive whichever sins they see And love you unconditionally
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12-20-2005, 06:05 PM | #642 |
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It would be really nice if someone could give me some feedback please...
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12-21-2005, 11:21 AM | #643 | |
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12-21-2005, 09:04 PM | #644 |
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Ive just split up with my girlfriend and wrote these about her. Women
forgive me when were together, doubt me when were apart. Love me when were together, and hate me when were apart. Cant cope with it nomore, Dont want to hurt and cry. You never bored me, But all i ask is why? when you left me, you said it was for good. and you was gonna leave me, you would stay if you could. but i loved you to much, For you to stay! So u went your way. As i watched you hail the cab, Rain fell down on our face. your cases were in the cab, then your lips kissed me. your taste on my lips, made me cry for u to be with me. made me cry for your passion, for your passion. when you left me, you said it was for good. and you was gonna leave me, you would stay if you could. but i loved you to much, For you to stay! So u went your way. It was so long ago, but my heart still cries for you. Never felt this low before, and never wanted you so much. The Truth I should have known, And i should have known not to stay. That night i was blown away, Our naked bodies lay next to each other. I thougth our love would never stray, And forever we would be together. If i said i loved you, It was the truth. And if i said i cared, It was the truth. Before it had started, It had finished. Remember our nights together, And remember our nights together in bed. Your blanket smelling of heather, And your kiss in my head. My tongue tasting your stomach, And forever we wold be together. If i said i loved you, It was the truth. And if i said i cared, It was the truth. Before it had started, It had finished. Im comin down of my high, And now i see reality. I wish i was still on that high, And my heart would feel mighty. One more night of passion, And one more night in our new fashion! I dont care what they say, I dont care anymore I only care for you to stay I dont care no more. If i said i loved you, It was the truth. And if i said i cared, It was the truth. Before it had started, It had finished.
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12-22-2005, 01:58 PM | #645 | |
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12-22-2005, 02:10 PM | #646 |
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Cheers Mate!!
Look at Me! Look me in the eyes, and tell me how you feel. look me in my eyes, for i have something to tell. I wanna say this before you leave and i need to say this before my heart bleeds. I dont wanna hear what i want to hear, as i know i will never expirience it. i cant bear to be alone, and have to deal with it. So let us dance, amd rest your head on my chest. naked and alone in the rain we will dance, and i will confess what. I wanna say before you leave, and i need to say this before my heart bleeds. I dont wanna hear what i want to hear, as i know i will never expirience it. i cant bear to be alone, and have to deal with it. ¿Tan si usted desea ir, - So if you wanna go, después de que todos lo que he dicho? - after all i have said? ¿y después qué he demostrado? - and after what i've shown? ¡entonces pondré en mi cama - then i will lay on my bed. y pine para usted y rogaré para usted! - and i will pine for you and pray for you! y opinión te quiero. - and say i love you. Regret Dont ask me why, I never meant to leave you this way. Dont ask me why, i was never meant to love what you say. And Dont ask me why, I never meant to lose my way. And give you my heart, Thats all i wanted. Not for us to be apart Just ask me what i wanted. Well i wanna touch your lips, In the pourin rain. and hold your hips, as we dance in the rain. Feel your body close to mine, While drinkin wine. And listenin to Damine Rice. I should have tried, to make heaven wait. I should have tried, not to change fate. And I should have tried, Though its not to late. Cause one day i will hold you, In another world. Just me and you, holdin each other close... Well i wanna touch your lips, In the pourin rain. and hold your hips, as we dance in the rain. Feel your body close to mine, While drinkin wine. And listenin to Damine Rice. So now im saying goodbye to you, Im sayin i will always love you. i will always miss you, and care for you. But till i see you again, God will protect you. and we will kiss in the rain, and dance in the rain. Well i wanna touch your lips, In the pourin rain. and hold your hips, as we dance in the rain. Feel your body close to mine, While drinkin wine. And listenin to Damine Rice.
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12-22-2005, 04:53 PM | #647 |
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when i get done with this
ill pass you my conclusion alot more thinking to be done its all just such confusion where i go or what i do time is going and iv alot to lose i wonder why i am thinking this as i know what would happen if everyday i see you face i wonder why im in your grace sometimes when i look at you i realise what i have to do i want to be with you sweet darling all of this has got me falling from your ledge of friendliness to the ledge i cant dismiss i think of what it could be i know that its not true but why keep waiting for you show what would really make my heaven glow i know that this is foolish i know that its not true but i cant stress how much i long for dream and thoughts to follow true ill leave you with a question what have i done wrong? for you to not be needed by someone who needs you fairytales and little thoughts of sunshine and the sea will never make it to this earth for you and me to see i cant retract what i have done i cant bring back the pass i can however try my best to finish this at last all i need is fairytales and little thoughts of sunshine and the sea will fix me up beatufiully and make for forget about thee. when im finished ill give ya this you wonder why its not fixed ill leave you just this question to answer what have i done not really a song, well it has a chord structure to it but no chorus or nothing, i like to call it a collection of thoughts
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12-24-2005, 12:33 PM | #648 |
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I let you go.
Staring blankly at your face, Watchin you smile. its surrounded by a cheap frame, And protected by glass. Your long brown hair, Hangs behind your back. The colour of your cheaks, Bright and happy. Your sat on a bench, And the picture sits on my desk. Your picture goes hazy, The taste of salt in my mouth. I wipe away my tears, And drink another drink. Your below me now, Still i look up to you. I pray everynight, For you to protect me. Protect me till the day, when im with you. I remember seein your body, Layin still in my arms. Not saying a word, Not breathing. I hold your head to my chest, Thinkin i was protectin you. I began screamin your name, Shoutin loud in vain. Your body stil warm in my hand, Your last words still in my head. I kissed your lips then your head, and then i let you go, I let you go... i remember you being lowered, Watchin the coffin go in to its coffin. The rain pattin on the lid, And runnin down my suit. People surrounding me, Sayin it will be OK. As i threw down the rose, It landed on your Plaque. Thats the sign i knew it was over, Thats the sign i knew you was gone. So now i sit here, Staring at your face. Longing for you to be here, I remember... I let you go, I let you go. Hush "Hush... And close your eyes, And i'll be your eyes. Take my hand, And i'll hold you close. Dancing slow to the band, And It'll be OK." So you took me back, Back to your house. Or naked bodies, Alone in your house. A night of passion, Like never before. Never going outta Fashion, The door to my hearts Wide open, And heres what you said... "Hush... And open your heart, My heart is already open. Ive never felt, This Fulfilled before. Im ready to melt, Before you." Is it necessary, For these words you speak? Time so blury, That your words Leak. So fast, I cant write them down. They'll always last, Forever in my head. And heres what you said... "Hush... And close your lips. And watch my Lips. Thank you for your love, I must go now. Though i'll never forget your love, Or how you made me feel. The Beating of you heart! Slow down your heart, Slow down your lungs too. But dont forget your heart, As you could do. And listen to your heart, And start seein now. Now tell me how apart, Your love is now. Did you see that star die? Did you see that star be born? And did you hear that lie? Of love and porn? It came from your forest, But no-one heard it. So just leave it to rest, Bit by bit. Slow down the beat... of your bruised heart, But dont slow your lungs down. Your heart is fractured enough, So come lay down. And let me stroke you hair, While holding you close. I know this isn't fair, But we was always going to lose. Did you see that star die? Did you see that star be born? And did you hear that lie? Of love and porn? It came from your forest, But no-one heard it. So just leave it to rest, Bit by bit. Now tell me whats going on? When you rest your hand on my heart. Can you feel the beat has gone? Now that were apart. And im left with a lock of you hair, Your dark Long curls. You left in my draw, Sendin my heart in Wurls. Did you see that star die? Did you see that star be born? And did you hear that lie? Of love and porn? It came from your forest, But no-one heard it. So just leave it to rest, Bit by bit.. Got the blues bad. Well my heart is crying, Ever since the day you left. You can hear it Lying, Saying its fine. When really its dying. Well you've been driving my Blues now You've been fueling my time of depression. My heart thanks you now, for teachin me a valuable lesson Well everyday im blue, Walkin around in the rain. no souls on my shoes, leaving marks on the strain. The Strain of the blues! Well you've been driving my Blues now You've been fueling my time of depression. My heart thanks you now, for teachin me a valuable lesson On a sunday i go to Church, I kneel down and pray. Just me and him in church, But only he wants to pray. We both pray for the blues to die. Well you've been driving my Blues now You've been fueling my time of depression. My heart thanks you now, for teachin me a valuable lesson Well the sky is weepin, Since you left Its to got the blues. My heart to is weepin, And Thats why we sing the blues Well you've been driving my Blues now You've been fueling my time of depression. My heart thanks you now, for teachin me a valuable lesson
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12-26-2005, 09:47 PM | #649 |
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This is a country song, without a name at the moment
Up in the mountains where the wild horses run The only friend you have is the sun But you won't be alone for very long I'm coming, I'm coming You wait right there honey And we'll spend the rest of our lives together I'm not worried about working a dime in cotton fields, You'll be there I'm worried if you can withstand the length of our lives I hope you can, I hope you can You'll warm to the idea, girl, I'm sure And I swear, I ain't no bore But it still ain't too late to take the lovesick cure The hils are warming as spring comes 'round Everybody's a-headin' into town Sad faces as they drive past the grave mounds I'm not worried if I'm not earning enough to live, You'll be there, I'm worried if you can withstand the length of our lives I hope you can, I hope you can What your Ma told you 'bout living in the country My God, they were all lies Still, we get the best rainbows in the sky Come, let's share a whiksey, my Love You can never get enough of that suff And that stuff sends your mind insane I'm not worried about growing old, You'll be there I'm worried if you can withstand the length of our lives I hope you can, I hope you can Please Lord, don't let my ideas go up in a balloon Don't spin no curse with your loon Don't make it "Goodbye, I'll see you soon" (Deliberatley ill-fitting lines and rhymes )
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12-29-2005, 05:00 PM | #650 |
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hello hello!
i'm under the weather sick of living in blue and i can't decide whether to smile at you it's a cold air cold lungs day and i'm supporting yellow and then i see you come my way and i can't even say hello hello hello hello another sleepless night hello hello hello brain and your sleepless plight hello hello i'm falling from a great height hello hello and with your help i won't take fright red beacon shining it's blinding me i cannot see can you see me smiling and all because you looked at me hello hello hello another sleepless night hello hello hello brain and your sleepless plight hello hello i'm falling from a great height hello hello and with your help i won't take fright i'm under the weather sick of living in blue and i have decided whether i'm going to smile at you
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12-29-2005, 06:43 PM | #651 | |
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love this babe and i'm not just saying it coz it's you! that line about grooves is wkd. hope you had a great christmas spk soon xxxxxxx lovelove
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12-30-2005, 01:33 PM | #652 |
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am sorry darling, I dont speak soft words.
I only know the harsh words of my soul they mark you with their corners, and leave you with my scars. i must face the mirror, pay the world with time learn to calm my fever. disregard that mask on mine I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I must learn to let go just give me a few more hours, and then I'll really know Je suis le chéri désolé, je ne parle pas de mots doux. Je sais seulement les mots durs de mon âme ils vous marquent avec leurs coins, et vous partir avec mes cicatrices je dois faire face au miroir, payer le monde avec le temps apprendre à calmer ma fièvre. l'indifférence qui masque sur le mien juste me donner un peu plus d'heures, et alors je vraiment saurai Je suis désolé, je suis désolé, je dois apprendre à laisser va
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01-07-2006, 12:59 AM | #653 |
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Here's the lyrics to a song that I wrote several years ago. I've performed it at several gigs.
Waiting For Love Cold skies Off in the distance. This is my future. Waiting for me --- My mind Travlin’ in circles. No time for dreaming. Waiting for life --- Millions Trapped in a cycle. My heart is screaming. Waiting for love --- Waiting for love (x8) ______________________________ Untitled Love Song With all the people in love at the centre of space/ Reminds me that love has a time, and loves needs a place/ Why do we spend all of our strength?/ Looking for love/ Why do we search eternity’s length?/ Looking for love/ Why do we risk it all for something we can’t see?/ Knowing how painful these things can be/ I've spent all my stength/ Looking for love/ I've searched all of time/ Looking for love/ And I've found you/ That's all I do/ Is loving you/ One thing is true/ That I love you/ Nothing's changed/ Nothing's new/ I still love you/ ____________________ What do you guys think? Be nice, I have tender feelings.
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01-07-2006, 01:31 PM | #654 |
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^ excellent work audity, some class lyrics there! where did u play the gigs? Are u in a band or solo artist?
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01-07-2006, 05:08 PM | #655 |
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i'm a solo artist...but i'm usually backed by guest artists....no band for me....
i've done gigs in prague, dublin, and singapore...never a home gig!
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01-07-2006, 09:13 PM | #656 |
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excellent lyrics man!
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01-08-2006, 12:00 AM | #657 |
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nice material audity!
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01-08-2006, 05:02 AM | #658 |
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Thanks guys. Maybe I'll try posting a track on here.
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01-09-2006, 06:31 AM | #659 |
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a little snippet i just conjured up.
my love, if you please would you hold your breath for me cause i dont think ive ever seen an angels chest, rise and fall my love, if you please would you raise your glass with me cause i dont think ive ever toasted to the stars, up above my love, if you please if i asked shyly like the way you like and stuttered once or twice do you think you'd love me love? and you and me we'll sit outside with wind in our hair and love in our eyes and we'll talk forever it seems then the sun, like a cup is spilled rolling down every rock and hill and the dawn whispers to me it was a dream my love, if you please
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01-10-2006, 02:54 AM | #660 |
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that is really good genzoman!
do you mind if i steal it a make a lot of money off of it? lol. seriously, that was an excellent bit...keep working on it...i think you really got something!
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