Your lyrics

[Beevers_uk]

Here are some of mine...

Here...

[audity]

Beeves, I enjoyed 'Fuist,' 'True Love,' and 'Distance of Two Hearts.'
Do you have any tabs, sheet music, or even demo tracks for 'em?

'Why' proves that you are obsessed with Damien....

[Beevers_uk]

Haha, yeah im not sure why i put that there in 'Why' lol!!

And no i dont have tabs or anythign like that, im no good at writting the musical side of a song or anything like that!

[Beevers_uk]

Carve your name in my arm,
And tear it apart.
Show the real me,
Show my lifes i hide in me.
Stick to tatoos of your name,
They go before your scars.
All this sounds so lame,
And i'm to blame.
Just dont let me down.

Scream my name on hill tops,
Blind on hill tops.
Deaf as a drug,
And bathe me in naked hug's.
Suffocating my burnt black soul,
Dying slowly in your eyes.
Deeper in a hole,
From your south pole.
You still let me down!

Write his initials on my arm,
And sound your alarm.
Fooling ourselves still,
and still losing this constant will.
Forgeting all of your men,
And dissolving your sweet kisses.
Chewing lids on pens,
In smokey poerty dens.
Now i let you down.

[WhatAmIDarling?]

Originally Posted by Beevers_uk

Chewing lids on pens,
In smokey poerty dens.

I really like this line. Sorry for the terse-ness.

[Livo]

anyone at all

breathe in the scent of the cold night air
breathe in the scent of me
you pull me closer and i walk away
i can't help but walk alone

i've got mud on my shoes and
blood on my hands
and i know that somewhere
someone's crying...

somebody save me, somebody hear me
somebody call me, anyone at all
somebody take, somebody break
somebody call me, anyone at all

you wake to the cold night air
pushing through your windows again
the noise of the folks out on the street
the folks out looking for the end

you can see it there, the end's in sight
see it coming, dark across the light

i've got mud on my shoes and
blood on my hands
and i know that somewhere
someone's crying...

somebody save me, somebody hear me
somebody call me, anyone at all
somebody take, somebody break
somebody call me, anyone at all

and when it's over
will you still call me
your lovely mess
oh
such lovelyness

you can't break me down
you can try but you can't at all

i've got mud on my shoes and
blood on my hands
and i know that somewhere
i'm crying...

somebody save me, somebody hear me
somebody call me, anyone at all
somebody take, somebody break
somebody call me, anyone at all
anyone at all, anyone at all
anybody, somebody, anyone at all...

[maccas81]

livi, with these class lyrics, you are really spoling us!

[Livo]

Originally Posted by maccas81

livi, with these class lyrics, you are really spoling us!

oh ambassador! and thank you!

[Beastieboy]

Flicks through note book......

No one's ever heard/read any of my poetry before (apart from nosy neighbours), i just joined a band so im hoping this will change....

This is called 'This Girl/birds and bees'

Verse:
Woke up on Thursday, couldn't see
third eye blind
woke up on friday, had a dream
oh what a sight
I never met her but she could have
been my type
I never want to be the one to say
Goodnight.....

Chorus:
Well this girl she's the one for me
She makes me think of the birds and the bees
and even though i know that it is just a dream
and on and on and on

repeat but insert
.....I never met her but i know,
she was my type.....

[Beevers_uk]

I've lost my wayy,
And found myself here.
Because of your words,
I've Ended up broken and here.
Becuase of your words,
I've lost my words.

So Leave how you came,
With your eyes open.
And leave how you came,
With your heart closed.
Taken with a swipe of a pen.

Remember this day?
Riding trains to here.
On star lit dark nights,
I've ended broken and here.
Because of your lights,
I've lost my way.

[carvinC980t_kid]

Beastie Boy - good stuff! you should share more often!

Beevers - amazing as usual

[maccas81]

Originally Posted by Livo

oh ambassador! and thank you!

do you have any music on line yet livi?

[Livo]

i don't, no, but i recently recorded about ten tracks on my friend's laptop.. as soon as i get some blank cds it's gonna be up on my bebo band page. when it is i'll let yis know yeah?

[PenguinBoy]

Originally Posted by Beastieboy

Flicks through note book......

No one's ever heard/read any of my poetry before (apart from nosy neighbours), i just joined a band so im hoping this will change....

This is called 'This Girl/birds and bees'

Verse:
Woke up on Thursday, couldn't see
third eye blind
woke up on friday, had a dream
oh what a sight
I never met her but she could have
been my type
I never want to be the one to say
Goodnight.....

Chorus:
Well this girl she's the one for me
She makes me think of the birds and the bees
and even though i know that it is just a dream
and on and on and on

repeat but insert
.....I never met her but i know,
she was my type.....

love it i love the short lines that jst move onto eachother, it's like there's no time to finnish one though before another one slaps u in a face, it's like falling from a tree and being smacked by all the branches as you fall. But instead of hurting it's "lyric pleasure".

can't remember last time i posted a lyric: here goes:

U might have heared the first 2 verses before as they were part of a poem i once wrote.

Your Romantic

Every Love Song Sings my sorrow
Rebellions still follow
everyones the same
in their own different ways

I'm just admirer 42
just the same as 1 to 41
all who think they're
different from eachother

I can't be your romantic,
i know my fears to well
I can't sweep you off your feet,
even if i hear you yell

You want a shining knight
who'll do anything for your sight
but i'm a learnéd page
and reason is a cage

I can't be your romantic,
i know my fears to well
I can't sweep you off your feet,
even if i hear you yell

I can't love you in the melodrama
or love you in the fantasy
but i'll love you in reality
and say that i want you to be with me

If that is not enough
then i can't die for more
than thank the twists of love and time
that i saw ur face, fore it walked out the door.

I am fantastic

I do the verry best i can
I might mess up but atleast i try
I take all the bashing and rise above it
I love you but i don't get crazy about it cos...

I am part of nature
I try not to litter
I pick up the mess
I try to drink less cos..

I am fantastic!
I am wonderful!
I am brilliant!
I am amazing to me!


I try to speak to people
and i even try to like the mean ones
I try to make other people happy
and i even try to help the mean ones cos...


I am part of nature
I try not to litter
I pick up the mess
I try to drink less cos..

I don't walk, in the dark in the rains
Cos i love the slurmy little snails
and i don't salt my little path at night
to all those little sluggies' delight

I am fantastic!
I am wonderful!
I am brilliant!
I am amazing to me!

I am fantastic!
I am wonderful!
I am brilliant!
I am amazing to me!

[Beastieboy]

This is a really good thread i love reading everyone's lyrics.....

Anyway i'll give it another go....

It's called 'Green Leaves'

Verse1:
I've got grave stones out my bedroom window
but i'm not afraid of them.
I see people walking the streets
with their minds on the time,
their eyes see no further than their feet.

Chorus:
You can take what you want
leave what you need
for all that its worth
just remember to breath

Verse2:
Green leaves growing
but they won't be here for long.
Old ways dieing
and new ways soon to come.
Dreamers dreaming
they won't lay it on the line.
Well i've been dreaming of the passing of our time.

[carvinC980t_kid]

ok, well i just threw this song together in about 5 mins. i've been really really really depressed today. i haven't been able to get rid of the memories of my ex and i out of my mind. here are a few songs i threw together while playing the guitar. they aren't done and still have some good changing to be done, but i felt like sharing anyways cause i don't write much! i hope you like these! comments, good or bad, please!!!!!!!!!! and be honest

“Best time of my life”
Cameron Morgan

"Remember that night
The one where we went to watch the stars
Our lips were locked so tight
We never made it out side the car
Thank god for bench seats
It made it so much more interesting

Remember how I was so scared
You could feel my heart when yours was pressed so closely to mine
You held me so tightly and kissed with fire burning inside
Why do I still see the fire in you even though you aren’t mine

Too many tears have fallen
We fought too many times
I’ve expressed my loneliness too many times
Each time you say you miss me
But you step further away
Its time to quit this game
Lets hold hands and together we’ll pray

Remember how we use to laugh
All alone in your laundry room
Laughing so hard
We’d both be crying with laughter
Oh what a amazing sight

Remember how we’d ride around
All stretched out in the truck
The little kisses dropping you off to work
And the texts with just a heart

Too many tears have fallen
We’ve fought too many times
This passion is still burning within us
Last make the most of this
And these cool fall nights
So if it ever gets too cold outside
You’ll always have me by your side

Remember how we use to think
How great it would be
To spend our final year at home
Just you and me

Remember that night you called me crying
I knew what you had to say
I begged you not to come over
You left me that night with only the taste of your lips to remember

Remember how we thought we would stay best friends
Until the end of time
Then why am I searching here
But no friend is to be found
I guess times changes
And so did you
Just don’t forget to remember all those good times
Because I’ve still got time to leave more for your memories"


here is another song that i just have alittle bit too.


"should have seen it coming"
cameron morgan

"Where did it all go
Am I really that blind
How could this go wrong
The day before it all seemed so right
How have you been
Does it still keep you up at night
I’ve been so lost
I need you by my side
Oh lord, please show me the light

I’m trying to break free
But I just keep falling harder
I’ve tried to run and hide
But precious memories just linger by my side
You’re so precious
There ain’t no gem that shines as bright
You’re so beautiful
your beauty is so radiant i don't need light"

so yeah, i'm sure after this weekend.. i'll have another song to share, because i'm expecting to be in a really ****ty mood on saturday night while she, my ex, is at another schools dance with some guy.

[Fool]

New song I wrote and recorded earlier today.
It's the first thing I've written in about 3 months, so I'm a bit chuffed!


________________________
Must You Go?

Draw me in
But give your time to me now
Or stay with him, him
And let him bring you right down

What you've done, what you've done
Tell me why I should drown
In wanting you, you
And what I thought we'd found

So shallow
I'm just another face
And you said, you said "go"
But I'm still stuck in this place

You said, as you undressed
Of how your love had turned so black
And what you want, you confessed
And pushed me down onto my back

And again, we came
Making up for what he lacks
He wants you
He wants you back
You must go back
Must you go back?

And as you leave
Just as easily as you came
I can't believe
That I fell for it again

This love

A thousand words
But they only seem to hurt
Make your mind
Whatever you decide

But don't take me for a ride
Because I don't have the time
_____________________________

www.myspace.com/benbroommusic
You can hear it there.

[carvinC980t_kid]

I wrote this song today after school. i had lunch with my ex and it was just depressing to realize how things have changed so much. like a slap in the face all over again. but i wrote this and got guitar to it all in about 5 mins.

stars quit shining
moons run off
here i am
feeling so lost
its all growing further, further away
every day
it's a feeling that feels so at home inside
cause it's all i've ever known

well, i don't need you here
but i want you buy my side
come keep my company
cause life just doesn't feel right
baby, come sing me to sleep
left me touch your beatuiful face
and get lost in your eyes

nights are groing colder
i sit alone out by the fire
holding myself thinking
trying to make sense of what i've lost
well this all seems so strange
lord, please tell me this is a dream
cause each and every day
i know we are drifiting further apart

yeah, i want you here
i'd do anything to have you by my side
mhm, lets waste away a night
laying side by side
lets laugh, hug, and kiss
and try to forget our sorrows just for one night

stars quit shining
moons gone off
here i am
feeling so lost

stars quit shining
moons run off
here i am
i hope you really are better off

[carvinC980t_kid]

how long must i wait here
just to see your face
i've been waiting so long
only to remember what use to be
friendships always come and go
no one ever sticks with me
i've been waiting here so long
i guess i always will be

time doesn't heal for me
words of condolence just make me bleed
why have you left me for better company
we were supposed to be best friends
have fun through out our whole senior year
now time has shown that you are doing it all with out me

how long must i wait
do you really want anything from me
or is telling me we can be friends when we heal
just a form of you trying to comfort me

time doesn't heal for me
sorrow has taken over me
i didn't think you'd leave me completely
we were supposed to be best friends forever
now you're spending you senior year
giving all your good times to everyone but me

how long must i wait
how long must i wait here
how many times will i cry
how many times will i scream why
how long must i wait here
do you truely want anything from me
lets be honest here
is teling me we'll be best friends soon
just a form of you trying to confort me

[PenguinBoy]

what does anyone think of my songs?

sorry to be a bit demandful, but i'd really like to know what peoples thinks, whether they need work, or if ya actually like em!

[Beevers_uk]

Originally Posted by WhatAmIDarling?

I really like this line. Sorry for the terse-ness.

Thanks!! What does Terse-ness mean by the way?

[Beevers_uk]

Originally Posted by PenguinBoy

what does anyone think of my songs?

sorry to be a bit demandful, but i'd really like to know what peoples thinks, whether they need work, or if ya actually like em!

Im not telling you what i think of your songs hehe!!

Just Kidding!! I loveeeeeeeee the verse...

"I can't love you in the melodrama
or love you in the fantasy
but i'll love you in reality
and say that i want you to be with me"

I love it soooooooo much!!


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I defy them stars,
Cause they lied to me.
And they lied to me of beauty,
The beauty that should be honest.
But to be honest it owuld be a lie,
And to lie it would be honest.
But no matter how honest it would just be a sin.
A sin so painful Jesus could not forgive me,
And to forgive me would raise doubt.
A doubt of if love is pure and honest,
Can honesty and Pureness be forgiven?
And when speaking of forgiving, then speak of passion,
Passion from a kiss to a rose,
A rose to a petal,
A petal to a bud,
A bud to a petal,
A petal to a rose,
And a rose to a kiss,
A kiss on your lips.
Lips so red they steal my breath,
A taste upon your breasts.
Your breasts fall and rise with every breath,
In one breath you say
In one breath you say
You Say
You Say

I Dont Love You.

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I wrote this for someone i know, shes an amazing woman, and rocks

ASK

If i asked you to let me kiss you, would you say yes?
If i asked you to let me hold you, would you say no?
If i asked you to let me see your eyes, could you say maybe?
If i asked to taste your lips, would you shush me with your finger tips?
...And then if i asked you to let me love you, could you accept it, and believe it?
More importantly, would you be my Juliet?

And if i tasted your kiss,
And if i felt your ryhtm from your heart.
And if i was blinded by your eyes,
And if i was poisoned by your taste.
...Would you love me, and let me be your Romeo?

And we'd kiss in a pook of naked lights,
And crimson stars.
Beneath balconies at night,
We'll stare at stars.
And i'd whisper soft in your ear,
And i'd share my fear.
Hearing doves cry,
As we both sleep and lie.

But while i sleep.
And i dream.
I see your name,
And i wake.
And my Balcony Is a bridge,
My lights are ****e.
And my stars are wars in the sky.
But i still see your name and i still ask,

Will you be my Juliet?

[Vienna]

who is this woman of which you speak??? does she rock your socks??

[Beevers_uk]

She knows who she is, thats all! and she does rock my socks!! My Purple, Red and Blue Socks! She Rocks!!

[maccas81]

Originally Posted by PenguinBoy

what does anyone think of my songs?

sorry to be a bit demandful, but i'd really like to know what peoples thinks, whether they need work, or if ya actually like em!

i'm a big fan dude, i believe i told you this before, if theres any specific songs you want my assessment of, send em to me and i shall be glad to analyse them!

[carvinC980t_kid]

this is a song i just wrote while being extremely depressed. cheers

for 15 minutes i was on top of the world
when i looked at you it seemed like nothing changed
now in 15 days you'll be with him
dancing the night away

i did this to myself though
got no one to else to blame
i should have spent the day at home
so i wouldn't waste the night crying away

looks of hope are all you send me
your words they crush me as i lay awake
your beauty is something that astonishes me
your lips are sweet, but so hard to read

i did this to myself though
got no one else to blame
i was better off staying home alone
instead these tears fall too easily

[PenguinBoy]

Originally Posted by maccas81

i'm a big fan dude, i believe i told you this before, if theres any specific songs you want my assessment of, send em to me and i shall be glad to analyse them!

nah it's cool! hehe analysis!

I just posted my lyrics and was checking back on the thread every few secconds to see if someone had posted, and i couldn't wait anymore so i just demanded comments lol!

thankyou for liking them

[audity]

^ PenguinBoy, your songs are great

Where are those lyrics you are talking about?
All I found were your songs on Myspace...lol...
"Crumpets in the Morning" is addictive.

[PenguinBoy]

Originally Posted by audity

^ PenguinBoy, your songs are great

Where are those lyrics you are talking about?
All I found were your songs on Myspace...lol...
"Crumpets in the Morning" is addictive.

WICKED!

thanks-you !!

the other lyrics are on post #779 of this thread!

on crumpets i spin round everytime i bridge between verses lol, it's fun, then i have to run back to the microphone lol.

[audity]

^ PenguinBoy, I went back to #779 and I read through both your songs.
'Your Romantic' is a very energetic song, so much so that I can completely imagine how it would sound (if it was a Joseph O'Reilly song). Do you have a recording yet or a tab or sheet music or anything? I'd really like to hear what it sounds likes. Lyrically, I like it when you say: "I'm just admirer 42 / just the same as 1 to 41 / all who think they're / different from each other." Isn't that how it always is? You capture that ****ty "truth" candidly.
In the stanza:
I can't be your romantic,
i know my fears to well
I can't sweep you off your feet,
even if i hear you yell
I feel that the last line just doesn't fit. Even though it rhymes, it is just out of place. Perhaps you could try:
I can't be your romantic,
i know my fears to well
I can't sweep you off your feet,
I won't be trapped inside your cell
or
I don't trust you behind your veil
or
I won't come when you ring your bell

Just suggestions.