My EP demos

robmcgrail · 11-07-2006, 07:09 PM

Hey, ive recorded 4 demo's of songs I'm planning to record for an album im currently recording. Anyway, i have pretty clear ideas on how i want to develop them, whats recorded is really the very very basic shell of the track, so im not looking for a critique on a final product, im looking more for an imtemidiante critique on how you think the core of the song sounds.

The songs are:

Land of the Elephant

Foolish

Keep me Cloaked

Grandfather Clock

A comment on any one of these songs or multiple ones would be great.

Cheers.

My Soundclick

Myspace

robmcgrail · 11-15-2006, 07:47 PM

Cummon. just a little bit if feedback... no

orangeB · 11-18-2006, 04:15 PM

Hi Rob, I took the time to listen. Your lyrics were good, and the music ok.
Your voice sounded a touch lost. But these are only early demos as you say... who knows, this time next year. I feel qualified to comment, as I have a collection of around 20 original songs that I think are good, others may say differently!!
Forget stardom, fame and fortune and just make yourself smile with your handcrafted music. You'd hate all that cash!

robmcgrail · 11-19-2006, 12:58 AM

Ha, well im not sure id hate. it, but id use it, not spend it.

But nah, im not looking for stardom, i have now illusuions. I write for myself. and my music is what of me i offer to other people. So, i apprichate you taking the time to listen.

Thanks

11-07-2006, 07:09 PM	#1
robmcgrail Lord of Lovely Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 198	My EP demos Hey, ive recorded 4 demo's of songs I'm planning to record for an album im currently recording. Anyway, i have pretty clear ideas on how i want to develop them, whats recorded is really the very very basic shell of the track, so im not looking for a critique on a final product, im looking more for an imtemidiante critique on how you think the core of the song sounds. The songs are: Land of the Elephant Foolish Keep me Cloaked Grandfather Clock A comment on any one of these songs or multiple ones would be great. Cheers. My Soundclick Myspace

11-18-2006, 04:15 PM	#3
orangeB Eskimo Baby Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 12	Demo Hi Rob, I took the time to listen. Your lyrics were good, and the music ok. Your voice sounded a touch lost. But these are only early demos as you say... who knows, this time next year. I feel qualified to comment, as I have a collection of around 20 original songs that I think are good, others may say differently!! Forget stardom, fame and fortune and just make yourself smile with your handcrafted music. You'd hate all that cash!

11-15-2006, 07:47 PM	#2
robmcgrail Lord of Lovely Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 198	Cummon. just a little bit if feedback... no

11-19-2006, 12:58 AM	#4
robmcgrail Lord of Lovely Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 198	Ha, well im not sure id hate. it, but id use it, not spend it. But nah, im not looking for stardom, i have now illusuions. I write for myself. and my music is what of me i offer to other people. So, i apprichate you taking the time to listen. Thanks