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07-23-2004, 08:14 AM | #61 |
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Guy with a shovel on his head...
Not sure if you're running away and you change your mind from day to day about who you are and what you need immersing yourself in travel and greed fleeting from a place as you outstay your welcome and chasing the high or the next time you come but something it burns, and your guilt has a face and the root of your problem is in the same place It is what it is, there is no riddle, just remember who you are as you become who you want to be facing your flaws, taking time for reflection the best type of cure is always prevention missing your input but glad that you're gone I can't seem to handle your views for too long when you wake up and feel something is missing look out the window and thank God that you're living and when you work hard at shaping your brand remember you'll always have three biggest fans It is what it is, there is no riddle, just remember who you are as you become who you want to be
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07-23-2004, 09:49 AM | #62 |
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[img]smileys/smiley19.gif[/img][img]smileys/smiley19.gif[/img][img]smileys/smiley19.gif[/img][img]smileys/smiley11.gif[/img] If you ain't feeling it... Glad you think I'm a good one and it's nice to know friends agree but I can tell you're still not sure not one hundred percent it should be me don't stay because you should do or because of the things I do being special or nice or a good one in the end won't be enough for you CHORUS It doesn't matter that you should it matters that you don't this is a one-way street baby and it's lonely here waiting for you 2 I can tell that you wish you did but it's plain you ain't feeling it maybe it's too soon and your heart is still with someone else or just not with me you can't pick whom how or when but you can be honest with me If it doesn't fit it's worse to force it it builds my hopes up to crush them you see CHORUS It doesn't matter that you should it matters that you don't this is a one-way street baby and it's lonely here waiting for you
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07-27-2004, 10:17 AM | #64 |
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you're sitting there, your face i cantsee you've got your eyes closed, not looking at me words wont come, gestures must do so i lean over gently and kiss you on the cheek you appear startled, like u dont know whose there and you realise, u dont care i could get angry, but whose to blame but myself? all i can do is sit back and scratch you look at me, as if, what the hells that but from the brief bit of intimacy it eases my mind to rerturn to normalacy the strangeness of love, is eclipsed by the pain moments of awkardness, again and again and after settling down after fifty odd years wondering was it just worth all those tears... .....i dont know. i wrote that last night so theres tinkering to be done with it, but just wondering what eskimos think of it |
07-27-2004, 10:28 AM | #65 |
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its not finished either though, at least i dont think, havent given much thought to it cos i fell asleep after i got as far as is done.
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07-30-2004, 12:16 AM | #67 |
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here yea, thats is really nice |
08-03-2004, 10:04 AM | #68 |
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Can you translate it back into English?
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08-03-2004, 10:09 AM | #69 |
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PS tomas, can you edit that humungous post!!! It freaks me out [img]smileys/smiley5.gif[/img]
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08-03-2004, 12:21 PM | #70 |
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i thought it was just me![img]smileys/smiley36.gif[/img]
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08-10-2004, 06:41 PM | #71 |
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This is a song of mine/my band's. You can hear others at www.purevolume.com/goodbyetomorrowif you want. Sorry for the shameless advertising... Tied By Miles If I could, I would fix our wrists together In such a fashion that God, Himself, couldn't tear us apart But impossibility knows nothing of compromise And hope can only take us so far Tracing your outline in my sheets Painting your face on my pillow Faking going to sleep So I can fake waking up to you But my hands are tied by miles... If I could, I would rest our cheeks together So I could hear every word that escapes your mouth And kisses could act as punctuation And I would pray and wait for periods and exclamation points Tracing your outline in my sheets Painting your face on my pillow Faking going to sleep So I can fake waking up to you My hands are tied... Tracing your outline in my sheets Painting your face on my pillow Faking going to sleep So I can fake waking up to you But my hands are tied by miles... All lyrics written by Matt Gilbert. Copyright 2004. All rights reserved. Thanks if you read. |
08-11-2004, 08:57 AM | #72 |
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I really like the chorus mate, I've felt that many-a-time!!! You ever missed someone from your bed and catch their perfume and desperately tried to find where it came from on the pillow? [img]smileys/smiley19.gif[/img] [img]smileys/smiley5.gif[/img] I'll check out your tunes when I'm home and have adsl.
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08-11-2004, 09:05 AM | #73 |
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My run When I feel the hunger you fill me up, you fill me up when I feel I'm falling you pick me up, you pick me up and I win back the sun and it's true what they say and I've been blessed the whole of my life when it's you and I know I've had my run I've had it all and seen it gone, gone, gone I've had my run I've had it all and seen it gone, gone, gone, gone when you feel the thunder I'll fill you up, I'll fill you up when you feel you're under I'll pick you up, I'll pick you up and I win back the sun and it's true what they say and I've been blessed the whole of my life when it's you and I know I've had my run I've had it all and seen it gone, gone, gone I've had my run I've had it all and seen it gone, gone, gone, gone
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08-12-2004, 01:29 AM | #74 |
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I see your face in every place i feel your pressence and all your essence i feel the warmth that you provide i ve seen you smile, i ve seen you cry 'cause everythig that i remember, is you{bis} All the moments that we ve had All the happy and the sad That first kiss in the dark The last goodbye in the car 'casue evething that i remember, is you{bis} Now are you happy or are you sad friends and family Now how's your life? 'cause everything the i remember, is you{bis} This is what i used from a poem and made it intoa song in 2001. is called "First Love" Any questions about it feel free please i ll tell ya the story Alex |
08-12-2004, 07:42 AM | #75 |
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Hi everyone, sorry it's a bit long but I'd love some feedback on it - Marc.
Old George has always known how to please the ladies They’ve always been charmed by his amazing stories But he stole them all from a strange man named Guy That he killed when he threatened to reveal old George’s lies All the teachers from the law school now gather around They are looking for apt pupils all over my town To digest all their lessons and to feed their hungry pride And now all the kids are searching for safe places to hide The policemen are nervous, they’re looking for a priest Who’s known to convince minds with nothing but his fists The rumour says he’s possessed and enjoys too much wine But I know that it’s more complex and what is on his mind My neighbour she’s so greedy, she would sell her soul for gold She sees herself so pretty and now she’s scared of turning old And her daughter, she’s ashamed of her mother’s acts and thoughts She wants to tell but respect keeps the words stuck inside her throat Poor Harry he’s sweating, he’d love to ask Sara to dance But she’s thinking about Arthur who’ll soon return to France To meet Charlotte, his first lover who still surely feels the same But Charlotte doesn’t speak no more, the wait drove her insane While sleepwalkers are meeting and kissing beneath the moon Sad Suzanne, she feels lonely and lost inside her room She’s sitting by her window, her diary still in sight She just wrote that for one moment she’d love to feel alive When Richard declares his love, pretty Jane always laughs He pretends he’ll cut his wrists for her, she says that it’ll pass But Richard was not pretending, they’ve just buried him down And a large crowd was attending while Jane was leaving town The last train leaves the station for honour or for hell All the soldiers hold a ticket though none of them can tell If the beggar is lying when he claims that he has slept On this bench for ten years and seen no train returning yet |
08-13-2004, 08:40 AM | #76 |
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greg, that is great!!! I love the stories, really cool. Is there a chorus in there, does this tune have music to it or is it just lyrics at the moment? Great stuff.
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08-13-2004, 09:35 AM | #77 |
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thanks a lot Juzzza
well it's just lyrics at the moment and I'm having a hard time trying to turn them into a song. It's rather long so I fear it might sound boring at the end. Maybe a chorus could fix that but I haven't thought of one yet. |
08-13-2004, 09:47 AM | #78 |
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this is a different one based on conversations I often had with my friends.
No, not again Try to breathe and relax And don’t draw conclusions From a smile, from a laugh Yes, I believe she’s so fine She could change everything But go to bed now and rest your weary eyes We’ll see what tomorrow brings Tell me, how could I sleep? How could I let things go? No, don’t try to keep Me from letting her know I call for the sacred fate That has bound queens and kings My heart can’t rest and I just can’t wait To see what tomorrow brings Dear friend, rely on fate for that And you’ll rely on me tomorrow To mend your broken heart To get you through the sorrow Your heart’s too easy to tease You know, signs can have many meanings So don’t fall so fast down on your knees But see what tomorrow brings Tomorrow will steal her away from me And take her to another land Yes, tomorrow she will sail the sea I don’t know if I’ll see her again But before time leads us apart And regret keeps me from living I’ll meet her tonight, I won’t betray my heart Because I know what tomorrow brings |
09-11-2004, 05:49 PM | #79 |
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Many Tears from russia have you seen the news all this scarred crying kids runnin around in the mud shouting some names of dead friends killed for nothin with a future a head this isnt right innocent kids maybe five or six killed for nothin with a future a head Something must be done never let things like this come undone, justice must be judge for this terrible crime, runnin round killing kids something must be wrong thats the first verse and chorous
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09-11-2004, 07:07 PM | #80 |
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i just wanna say that greg rules.[img]smileys/smiley4.gif[/img]
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09-12-2004, 03:23 PM | #81 |
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Alright mate, I've wrote quite alot of songs, this is one of my favourite ones, called 'Paradise': You & me, we're, lost in lust & we're not getting out. So stop the fussing & take the doubt out of it all. I've come to like it, despite the fact im, not quite in love. There's no more fighting or ways to hide from yourself. Im gonna take the fall of you, & put it to shame & for all the crimes I've held, there is no pain. Im gonna take the fall of you & spread this new name, if loves like disease well then, there's nothing to gain. Im ready to take no more & leave it all behind & save this land of luxury for someone else to find. Paradise is made for all coz there goes time, shooing at summer breeze, I declare, you mine. - Let me know what you think... Cheers, Paul.
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09-12-2004, 09:59 PM | #82 |
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wrote this4 years ago about a guy who had to go through chemo for 6 months and then found out he had to go through it again for a year more. Trust in me' Two seasons of rain, four more to come dreams are all poisoned, no warmth from the sun don't know what you're going through, but I'd go in place of you can't explain the pain but eyes tell more than words ever could can't remain the same given the chance, no one ever would trust in me these words are true, trust in me, I'll be there for you, I’ll be there for you felt autumn, even as a new bud already seen paradise while still bone and mud no mystery about what lies ahead your own history is engraved in your head still a quivering in your voice still uncertainty in your walk trust in me, I won't let you lose trust in me, I'll wrap your wounds trust in me, take my heart as yours trust in me, you will endure, you will endure remember nothing worth having is easily gained something worth giving will always remain don't say you can't believe don't say hope is a thief make memories while you still can can't let tomorrow become yesterdays plan no need for all those tears trust in me, I'll still your fears trust in me, it won't be a lie raise your eyes see the clear blue sky remember, when troubles threaten I'll keep them at bay do not surrender ideals with substance fire the clay look past the moment, don't forget home look to love, you're never alone, you’ll never be alone trust in me, just put your hand in mine, trust in me, it will all be better in time,trust in me, I’ll be there for you, only for you Edited by: stargift |
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[img]smileys/smiley19.gif[/img]That's beautiful, stargift.
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09-13-2004, 08:53 AM | #84 |
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Hello everyone, What a talented bunch you all are. I'm very proud. I wrote this about being dumped! Its called Winter Wrist. She said I'm leaving you tonight, her make ups been thickly applied but shes still beautiful to me, She drags her stuff down the stairs, catches me unawares with a right hook and some spit Bridge You know she's so beautiful when shes angry with me, You know shes so beautiful when shes shouts this at me Chorus You are the winter on my wrist, you are the devil I first kissed, so why dont you take hands off me, I'm moving on without you just let me be. Her bags are packed and by the door where we kissed just an hour before and I dont what I said I need her now so much more, left hand up feeling sore, bruised soul is left for dead Bridge Chorus End Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Ta
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09-13-2004, 09:01 AM | #85 |
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Loads of good stuff here, I love the left hook and spit line Nathaniel!!! I had a monster ex who bit, kicked, punched, scratched and even head-butted me!!! My lyrics for that episode of my life are as follows: 1. I think of you from time to time after hearing a song or something you'd say I smell perfume or hear a laugh see a girl in the distance who walks the same way Chorus It's funny how time erodes away the weight of bad times andpain it's hard to think you'll never be a part of my life again time must be a healer as I can't recollect how I got these scars 2. and have you found another life and the things you couldn't find with me or are you still blaming the one you love whoever he may be Wish I had a line in there about left hooks and spit...
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09-13-2004, 09:11 AM | #86 |
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Unfortuantely I wish I had just made it up. I actually got knocked out by my x, who then spat on me. nice lass!
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09-13-2004, 09:27 AM | #87 |
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Yea she sounds like a 'keeper'!!! The spit was a nice touch have sparked you first... [img]smileys/smiley5.gif[/img]
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I repaid her by being really nice about it. Foolish boy that I am. OPh well you live and learn at least she didnt sleep with my flat mate which is what my other x did. Mate I really can pick em! Wrote a much nicer song for my best female mate Jo who has moved to the big smoke. She is my rock and agony aunt rolled into one. This is called Thank You. Don't take on so cause you'll be fine, but I miss you already, You've only just gone, but it feels like a month, at least its not down to something I did wrong, I want to say thanks for your grace and ability to take my weight, when I lean on you, you're skin is so true, I guess I just miss you. - You're all I've got Thanks for your mind when I cant ryhme, or get to work on time, thanks for your call, I'll try and stand tall, Drugs? well you know I've taken them all, And when you go, I will not show, the pin pricks in my arms, Cause you'll be fine and you will shine while keeping me safe from harm - You're all I've got. I've exaggerated some of it for effect! What do you reckon? I wrote on Saturday and played at my gig last night. It went down ok.Edited by: Nathaniel
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09-13-2004, 09:57 AM | #89 |
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It's good mate, although every Damo fan will note the Professor line but I'm sure they won't mind.
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Its not exactly the same but obviously I did get the idea from him, I may yetchange it to something more original but it just fits in so well. I'll have a think... which may take me a while!
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